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I know its not much, but here's another teaser from the group park. (WIP)

Nice but very made, custom and overly detaily, thus artificial and sterile, as always.

Wish I could see more!

Disagree with Posix, I see more life in this than in most of your work. You need to get those glitches in the walls out though, and maybe rethink those flowers cause those dó look very artificial the way you used them.


But, overall, like it a lot.

Coupon, there's nothing that I love about it but there's nothing I hate about it. It's just a solid screen. But, like Ruben said, those glitches and flowers damage the natural setting and can be easily fixed. Great job.

I think you should try to make the fenced area around the corkscrew more smooth. Right now, you have this really nice organic flowing path and a square fence in the middle of it. So yeah. Looks nice otherwise.

Coupon, there's nothing that I love about it but there's nothing I hate about it. It's just a solid screen.

I'm not trying to demoralize you Coupon but this is what I feel when I saw your work, really can't point out what make this feeling though..

Nice start.
Maybe keep the tree colours original though.

what's wrong with artificial? isn't everything in a park man made? I mean some flower arrangements are artificial as hell and look damn gorgeous in real parks

Is this a good lay-out for a small woody?

Its to big to ne a kiddie coaster and not thrilling enough fir a park. I could definetly Dee this in a zoo though.

-Josh

I'm sorry but it can't get more boring. Even for this size.

I actually kinda like it for a kiddie kinda woody. Actually reminds me of:
http://rcdb.com/4495.htm



This is one of those cases where surroundings, archy, atmosphere etc. would really need to make the ride. However, if you can pull that off, I'm pretty sure I'd fully disagree with Liampie on this being boring.

However, if you keep it this size you need to get rid of the brake run and maybe condense that last part a bit imo. That track is way too short for 2 trains anyways.

Coupon, I actually think that looks quite nice, apart from the brown custom path.

I actually kinda like it for a kiddie kinda woody. Actually reminds me of:
http://rcdb.com/4495.htm



This is one of those cases where surroundings, archy, atmosphere etc. would really need to make the ride. However, if you can pull that off, I'm pretty sure I'd fully disagree with Liampie on this being boring.

However, if you keep it this size you need to get rid of the brake run and maybe condense that last part a bit imo. That track is way too short for 2 trains anyways.

I will look at this, thanks it's very helpfull.

"Are you ready to take Flight?"

wtf..you're monster robbie.

Sometimes i hate you.

You're work is always so gorgeous ,so refined....(being jealous here).
How the hell do you always pull it of?
You're good...very good.

Giovanola?