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I reckon the 'shopping' of this picture took more time than actually stacking those few walls on each other and taking a screen of it.

Then you probably missed the point.

Impressive, SoCalCoasters. no lag yet?

i like it, not the "best" thing ive ever seen, but tons of potential for construction, especially from you.

FK

Asshole.

Looks good.

I don't like the ending. The hill to the brake run seems forced, which could be because it is RCT. However, I do like the colors.

I like the compactness of the layout. It appears to have good flow but it looks like the trains would be hitting the first loop pretty fast to get enough speed for good pacing the rest of the way.

Those parallel diagonal parts look really good, makes the layout. The rest is good, but not memorable. Doesn't matter, one memorable part is enough.

One thing I would try is making the diagonal hill after the immelmann go farther down abd farther away from the core of the ride, which it obviously can do. Maybe till about 5 feet above the ground instead of the 15 it looks like now. And than obviously than you can make the upward right hand turn the larger turns and it might just give it more flow.

-Josh

Those parallel diagonal parts look really good, makes the layout.

Ok so here is another screen of mine and this time I do want feed back. Lol

Disjointed.

Clashing colours ,weird texture combinations.
It looks strange....

It's certainly an improvement from your previous work mrbuckeye. I kind of enjoy it. Why is the transfer track grey though?

its not grey. the Glass Makes it look Grey though.

^I agree with Dark_Horse that there are several good things about your screen, but at the same time you have soft maroons, browns, and grays on your roofs and buildings... then this weird bright red and yellow sculpture thing plunked in the path center

What is it exactly? I see a rollercoaster and than suddenly a grey and brown building and something red and yellow. What are you making? Is it a theme park?

yes it is a park. There are some better screens on the actual thread I created.

Then you probably missed the point.

Which is..?

After some practice over the past week, I made this early today.