(Archive) Advertising District / Dump-Place

Cheers for the comments on my screen guys.
That looks like a very good start coupon.

Coupon: I love it

Austin: The diagonal brown wall sets off the facade...

salsaontop@ you need to put a different texture on the roofs, and you have to chose better the colors, light brown with purple doesn't works.

^Thank you for the comment. Do you know what I could do to make it themed around.... well a cliff edge

I think the train is impractical and pointless in your screen, Coupon.

I'd like to see you do something other than the traditional small-scaled amusement parks.

Austin, do something to the one wall of the red building, and that screen would look pretty sweet.

I think you could do more with that red building, and make that square look more lively. Maybe a planter?... I can't really pick out what the best thing is to do here.

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I like it, but it feels like I've seen this done so many times before. Lots of tan, canvas roof market stall, strange pathing.
Its not bad, but it is fairly cliche. I guess I'll have to see more before I judge any further:]

The yellow thing on the roof looks cool though!

@Austin - What are the green and brown awnings hanging overhead on the bottom right of your screen. Or atleast what set is it from?

^^ Fisherman's awning pack.

^Thanks. Also Austin I really like the picture so far. Just a couple of changes that have already been mentioned and it will be awesome!

Where did all the color go? I think editing may spoil pictures but it fits the theme of the coaster

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If I were you I'd look at J Ks works with this Arabian theme. His is nailed plus you have two different variations ( all of djinn and the Alladin stuff from dreamport.

salsaontop, why would you continue to post pictures of a park you already have a thread for?

xtreme97, I like it, but just barely. I agree with Shots and I:C.

Looks extremely disorganized. I have no idea what it's supposed to be.

@Fizzix - I wasn't putting this one into my thread as this was the dump place. Am I not supposed to be adding shots of pictures I'm not ever going to put in the other thread? I'll stop if I shouldn't be doing so...

New members tend to post too many screens salsa so I'd take it easy. Try to finish your project and get better feedback on how to improve that way.

Finally discovered some inspiration - in the form of Rocky Mountain Construction's first full coaster, Outlaw Run (Silver Dollar City). Please note that this is in no way a recreation, simply toying with the concept.





For anyone unfamiliar with the concept, here is a convenient link.

I like the layout, but I feel the brake run at the end needs to be much longer - long enough to stack two trains outside the station. And as a nitpick I'd swap the rail and spine colors on the vertical drop.