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^I agree with Ruben on both pictures.

djbrace: nice colors and interaction but landscaping has to be a priority in making that screen better. I'm assuming it wasn't finished?
enigma: Ruben makes a good point, it's not very natural and the flowers are pretty random. I would expand the waterfall to use that space where you have the flowers to add color and make it interesting.

DJbrace you're on the right track. Something I really like about the composition of the screen.

DJ, I assume that's the park your working om with coup and the other guys?

-Josh

Great few screens guys.

Neat screens both of you.

djbrcace1234, the colors are stale as everyone's said. I'd love to see some low lying foliage at the under the Schwarzkopf though, would look good for both rides.

enigma, I like it a lot. I think you should turn much of the dirt/grass to just grass as it'd brighten up everything and make it look cleaner, but overall I'm pleased as to what you've been doing with that park.

Thoughts? Not sure about the rocks, but I don't want to put a fence either.

I quite like the feel of it, but I think the flower colors clash with each other, I think the wall-to-roof texture transition is clunky and unrefined, and the weird 3x3 grid going on in your paths is just distracting. I would break it up into something that more properly fits into the space, like maybe 2x2s or just simple 1x1 concrete slabs. The rocks and the gazebo look fine as they are. No fence needed.

Pro: The screen is very neat and I really like the Gazebo

Con: The large amount of grey path is depressing, and real shake roofs aren't pink.

yeah the pathway for most Six Flags parks (i assume that's what it is) in the entrance is more inviting than the rest of the parks. Despite what has already been said, why no fence?

Pink and red don't go together, unless they're supposed to clash. In this case I think that's not what you're going for with the flowers, so maybe experiment a bit more with those? Another small detail: Why is the top of the brickwork blue? Is it supposed to represent a water basin or something? It looks very forced IMO.

Next to these details it looks very clean, and I quite like it. The Gazebo looks great and the foliage/rocks are very appropriate I think. Only thing is most tree trunks aren't really green...

(P.s. Maybe some more American pride? Sure you can fit more american flags in that screen (A) )

djbrace1234 that is lovely.

Addict, good start. Consider breaking up the paths with more complexity. You chose a very strong grey concrete looking path that has very basic shapes (squares (with sometimes rounded edges)) cut out from it. I think even just a tree somewhere in there would do it well, or some gardens in a 4x1 square "stripe".

On an unrelated note, I'd really like to see some work by you again, posix! Just came to my mind =)

I reckon the 'shopping' of this picture took more time than actually stacking those few walls on each other and taking a screen of it.

That looks more like Photobucket just being a useless piece of shit.

Experimenting in RCT3 for a future project.

A compact slide complex:

I think the catch pool needs to be longer.

I think the catch pool needs to be longer.

The length is fine in terms of peepablility.

Done a bit more work. I'm experimenting with a large scale water park type of environment.

i like it. you should have all those slides sitting on a huge hill/mountain. change some of the colors