(Archive) Advertising District / Dump-Place
- 19-April 07
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BelgianGuy Offline
I'd use more merges since this seems to be single coaster, I mean hack in the actual lay down coaster so you can make the overbanks and such better I think it would make it better.
Also foliage and land textures could use some love tbh. -
tdub96 Offline
I'm with BG on this one, but kudos for attempting this DJ. I like the colors, and supporting that musta been a pain in the ass. Nice job. -
BelgianGuy Offline
I really like it but the walls on the right could use some more detail, like climbing plants and such, they're missing the vibrant details that the rest does have, keep at it you're getting really good here
Also the path looks a little weird with those colour combo's -
BelgianGuy Offline
Another suggestion is making the path inside the building isn't the same colour as the walls since it blends way too much to look good atm so I'd suggest changing that up so you'll have a little more contrast inside your building aswell. -
chorkiel Offline
the walls under the tower are too tin and look like they wouldn't be able to support a real tower..
other than that it looks really good. -
disneylandian192 Offline
Thanks for all of the great constructive comments everyone.
Legleo: Thanks! I like the open doors myself too.
Laimpie: El Encierro is my main source of inspiration, but as in all of my previous projects my initial inspiration ends up becoming far too similar, so I'm trying hard to maintain a separate identity while still allowing myself to build what I am inspired to build.
BG: I've added more to the walls on the left (which is what I assume you mean) and it has made a huge difference in the balance of this corner. I'm also working on other path options to not have the inside of the building blend in so much as you've described.
Pierrot: Thanks!
Chorkiel: I've explored many options but they either leave the lower arched walls too thin, or too chunky. This appears to be the happy medium. -
Liampie Offline
I don't think the flowerboxes work well here... Maybe in bigger buildings. On the contrary, the hedges are great! -
posix Offline
I think they work magically well. This is a new idea. Great stuff Roomie. I'm tempted to say it's your best work yet, especially since the colours work so well for me in he screen.I don't think the flowerboxes work well here... Maybe in bigger buildings. On the contrary, the hedges are great!
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K0NG Offline
^ Agreed. First thing I thought when I saw this screen was "what the fuck are those walls made of....planters???? Fucking great idea. Nice job Roomie -
RMM Offline
it's not a new idea. hate to say that since it sounds so cliche anymore.
but roomie, it's impressive how you use codex and still manage to clean up so well.
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