(Archive) Advertising District / The Sunset Resort

Fatha' - Alright, Thanks. I would have done the water spout, but I forgot to put it in.

Banana - Okay, Thanks.


The Plaza

This might sound kind of weird, but could you possibly add in something to represent speakers? I think that would be awesome (because most parks have some kind of music playing by their entrance). Just a little detail I think could look cool. Everything looks so great already. Although generally entrance buildings wouldn't have so many doors and windows on them...

Oh, and about your supports (they are configured well, but let me point out)... See how with this there aren't connector bits every few feet of support? Try taking out some of those slanted pieces and replacing them with smooth pieces. Would look more realistic IMO.

That is a great plaza and it's all good. Keep it up!

I don't like the bushes used on the building....I think if you just put a green section of wall there instead it would be better

Still playing with the colors a little bit.

Buildings are bad, because they lack forms and details, to give nuances to yours structures. So even if there are ideas to fit out (or organize) park, this lack harm to the whole. Otherwise maybe avoid putting too differents trees on a stale space. Bad use for quarter foliage which is on water.

Wishing to be comprehensible.

Im liking the park but this last screen is just....different. I dont like how the ride is completly surrounded by a building, because from the ride Ive been on ( acrophobia @SFOG), there was a more open building surrounding most of the ride with the queue in it.But it's your, do whatcha want

^Fixed; somewhat.

Wilderness Feeling?

All for looks?


Misc.

Floating bushes? I'd raise the land around those and make it look a bit more realistic. Add something to that area, it feels really plain. Also, there's something about the building in that 2nd to last pic that I don't like. I think it's a combination of the colors and the straw roof. They look odd together.

It's hard to be wilderness feeling with a giant brick building in the middle of a theme park.
how are guests supposed to get to their tables if they are surrounded by plants?

floating bushes should be addressed, yes.. the waterfalls are too square.

Wanted some feedback.


Fixed Entrance

The rope fences before the ticket booths could be shorter, the roofs or whatever those yellow suports are around of the ticketboots can use some poles around the corners, the flowers at the top right of the 2nd screen look too crowded, and the monorail looks like its floating. its just a couple of small things that need to be fix, but it looks pretty good overall.

looks good.
but there isnt enough buldings

Wanted some feedback.

still lovin' it.

Its a bit messy
I like it though, very original

^agreed.

It's a tad messy in places but overall its a nice little park.

This is a nice project, reminds me of the days when people played to have fun, rather to impress others.

^ I still do so.

Other than building some little shacks (use zero clearences) over your entrances and exits and having a magic floating monorail I don't really see anything wrong with it. In fact I find those screens extremely refreshing, this park looks like one of them I'd look around in for hours because so much thought and enthusiasm went into it.

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