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Park Entrance.

no bad begin, the use of all those plants don't appeal that much to me but if does give a special atmosphere.

not bad. the entrance shows some logic. i like that.
but the colours and forms aren't very aesthetic.
but latter comes with practice, unlike logic and understanding.

the rooves on the entrance buildings are kind of screwy.....but appart from that I like it. Colors are a little off but good overall. and I'm not fond of the single paths, but I know they can't be helped for a peep friendly park.

I like the tile edged paths, but why are there so many tiles edges...in the middle?

Also, I would have chosen shorter trees since your structures are short.

Levis - Thnx

Genius638 - It's before the entrance to the park.

Restaurant

Holy benches and windows Batman!

Lighten up on the windows, and theres something about that wall texture that just isnt clicking..

indeed use less benches and windows

^Already Done thnx.

little much on the arched deco trim, but otherwise looks quite pleasant. the chinese cedar is a bit questionable, and maybe too many identical tables.

Edited by ][ntamin22, 03 May 2007 - 06:34 PM.

Nice work. Although I wouldn't have the tables lined up like that.

Just wanted your feedback; Thanks.
Yes, my supports sucks.

Edited by rctfan123, 16 June 2007 - 07:18 PM.

well, I usually would say that this is kind of over-tree'ed.
But it works somehow, what is strange.
The coaster seems to be nice.
Keep up that work

Whoa, cutback, very retro!

Looks painfull, but that's what they're all about

i'm loving it.
it has a lot of single-wide nostalgia in it.

well done.
also the foliage, which is indeed massive, but working.
keep it up.

Thanks guys.

How about this?

Well done, great great job making it peep friendly. Couple of examples of this is The walkway along the lake and the cannons shooting water. Why not use that water feature (u know the spout) to make it look better? Also has a good six flags atmosphere.

Things to fix:
1) Your landscaping...it looks unreal for a realistic park. Either take the trees off the sand, or color it brown to make it look better.
2) The walkway across the lake near the rapids....theme it or something it looks poor with just the steel supports.

8.4/10

Most of this park has been really good. I love the garden-ey feel, yet I agree with fatha' about that last pic. I also suggest using another color than orange/gold for those paths and the queue

Nice work. No real complaints. Just continue to make the fine tunning efforts that have been stated above and you can't go wrong.

James - rctnw

Nice job on the rapids!