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Tell me what I cand do to improve. If anyone wants to help me I would love to make this a group park.





Comments Please.

If you want me to post more I have most of the Midway done.

Edited by Vidgms, 31 March 2007 - 09:28 PM.

well if you want to make a grouppark you should try to join a club .

the screen isn't bad, but some of the colors don't work that good, the white-red-yellow combo doesn't look good IMO.

It's actually not bad. I like the building on the left except for the checkerboard (it just looks like you just missed a spot on the floor. The other building is ok but I'm not too fond of the colors you have there.... the red gold mix just looks kind of ugly imo. Still, nice job.

Thanks for the comments. So in your opinions, what color would go with the red?

White might work.

Also, the awnings where the building on the left concaves look a little awkward. Otherwise you are off to a good start.

Edited by Gwazi, 26 March 2007 - 07:51 AM.

Also, the awnings where the building on the left concave look a little awkward. Otherwise you are off to a good start.

Thats what I was thinking but I haven't been messing with anything just yet.

Apart from what has been said, i think you should change the land texture underneath your paths, always tidys things up a bit.

Looks nice though, and i don't mind the awning (what Gwazi was saying).

colors are off....but the architecture is great! Only thing would suggest is some sort of covering/roof over the diagonal balcony on the building on the left.

I'm hesitant to change the color on the red building to white because a building across the street is white with gold. I just need to find better colors for the whole building.

I have come to the decision that this will probably end up being a Disney park because I started working on a Tower or Terror scenery with a movie lot area. We will see how this turns out.

Well, here is my Tower of Terror. Not anything special. I just went for it and tried my best.




Oh also. Can mods please change this to Untitled Disney Park. Thank you.

Edited by Vidgms, 26 March 2007 - 02:54 PM.

Hey, that's not bad. It just doesn't look creepy enough. Adding some more creepy textures to it might help.

^I pretty much agree with Gwazi on this. I'm glad you tried and gave it a go. It's good practice.

Keep it up!

/RCTCA\

hey it is bad. it's bland and blocky and one color and there's no detail at all. also the foliage needs serious work.

So, how would I go about making the building more creepy? I know that I am clearly missing the purple that most of the the actual rides have. Maybe some of the vines higher up on the ride? I don't know, I will mess around with it and find out.

I don't know how to make it less blocky, I pretty much copied it from a picture so I know I have the windows and other scenery pretty accurate. I will see what I can do about it.

You're building the Hollywood Tower Hotel way too large. Both version of the tower are tall and slender. If this is the Twilight Zone Tower of Terror (which it is modeled after) you are missing the section of the building that was transported to the Fifth Dimension. In all honesty I don't think you're going to get a lot of atmospheric inspiration looking at the Disney's California Adventure/Walt Disney Studio Park version. Instead look up lots of photographs of the Disney-MGM Studios version of the attraction and study how it sets itself up.

Looks okay as far as the general shape, but it really needs more textures so that it seems much more worn and creepy.

look at some real pictures, try to get as close as possible to the style. and I think it should be a darker color, but I'm not too familiar with what the tower looks like....

Hmm yah it looks a bit undetailed...
Add some more details to the building then it would look much better.
Also the color isn't that perfect.
I think even if you want to rebuild ToT it could need some color changes!

The color change is in store. So I totally realized something about ToT today. When I was looking at pictures for the first time I realized that part of the building is missing. I have been on the one in California Adventure like 10 times in the last month but never once realized this. I will see what I can do about the missing building parts and colors.

Looks very blocky, like stated. Don't be afraid to stray away from the actual design and add your own little twists on things. That's what makes park building fun IMO.