(Archive) Advertising District / Conga Creek
- 15-January 07
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mantis Offline
Congratulations on covering about 1% of the map.
Does this mean we get another 100 updates? -
Levis Offline
it's almost 2% already .
what you've build looks nice it has atmosphere, but we need more to really comment on it. -
Geert Offline
Congratulations on covering about 1% of the map.
Does this mean we get another 100 updates?
Lol, actually he filled up 42 squares. That means 42/2500 x 100 = exactly 1,68%
But it looks okay for now, not my favorite style. It's a bit to dark also.Edited by Geert, 15 January 2007 - 11:08 AM.
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Lloyd Offline
^ Wow, as if you actually worked that out.
Not alot to say on the screen, i don't think you should advertise until you can show some actual work. -
Ling Offline
the only thing I don't like besides the fact that it's really small, is the large round window in the upper part of the screen... it looks too large with all the 1/4 archy -
Phatage Offline
Congratulations on covering about 1% of the map.
Does this mean we get another 100 updates?
oh silly can you do subtraction? -
FK+Coastermind Offline
people make me laugh....anyway its nice for whats there. it could use more detail and less doors to single rooms with nothing in them. also you have about 30 different colors and patterns in that 1.68%. for an amusment park as you state it i would try to come up with some themes that have simliar colors or textures in te buildings. theme parsk like to do that, but you can still add lots of detail.
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Arez Offline
Thanks to everyone who left a real comment...anyway. Heres a shot of The Congo Market, Congo Rivers Midway Plaza.
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ChillerHockey33 Offline
That doesnt fit well with your first screen. Unless you took out everything in the first screen and built this in its place...
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Ling Offline
^that, and
while your architecture shows talent, there isn't NEARLY enough foliage to accommodate that much path. And those styles for some reason look horrible together like that. -
RMM Offline
wow that looks really good.
the paths look fine i think, but maybe one too many.
take out that brick path, maybe?
its a nice lil screen but try puttin a lil more trees n all. more green.
keep updating us. -
JDP Offline
Small park, small buildings (with nice detail and texture at that), great job with that. About the paths. Well, im sure you herd em'.
-JDP -
Casimir Offline
I like the blue accents
But there's something that bothers me...
The thread is called "Conga Creek", but the first picture says that the park is called "Congo River Amuesment Park", which also contains a mistake ^^ -
Lloyd Offline
Yeah i think the screen looks promising. The things that bug me the most are the paths (as has been said), some of the textures underneath the paths and the name/theme. I dont get the feeling of an 'Amusement Park' from this, more just fantasy. And i'm not sure if the first screen fits with this theme.
Keep going. -
][ntamin22 Offline
I absolutely love that screen.
despite it not really being reminiscent of the Congo.
the path could be toned down just a wee bit.. maybe remove the dirt. but definitely keep the rest.
it's smaller scale than i'm used to seeing, but it is undoubtedly very pleasant.
is that a man-made water feature?
the rocks should probably extend under the water, easily done with a little zero-clearancing.
very nice.. i'll look forward to more of this.
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