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Hey all! Here with a new creation I'm sure you'll love. I know I'm not very good, but I hope that you guys like this like I do. I hope to get better in the future. I now present to you the all famous, Lost in the Woods.


^Here is the cool station. (Well, in my opinion.)


^The 1st drop and the turn after it.


^REALLY corny forest fire section of the ride.


^The all-famous element Lost in the Woods is known for.

Now I know it might not look very good now, but I'm sure it'll look better when you actually look at it. It's also unfinished. Once I finish it, I'll put up a download.

As always, comments, criticism, and suggestions allowed.

Edited by ~-ThuNdeR-~, 22 November 2006 - 07:42 PM.

to me these coasters arent dueling. from what i see they are racers. dueling coasters need to have some element that make it like you fighting the other coasters like near crashes that make it feel like you clashing swords and such. the archy is ok. it could use alot more detail and color. right now its a brown wall and a black roof. add things that break up the two and give it more defention. its also looks very bare and unreal. moutains have open face but in layers. more of a mountain is smooth surfaces longer then one square seperated by rock face. also i dont get the woods. but you did say its unfinished so if you improve on these sorta things it will look better. good luck


FK+Coastermind

Thanks! I'll be sure to get on those suggestions as soon as possible! Thanks alot.

Terrain coasters doesnt mean that they have to be within 3 feet of the terrain the whole time. They are rollercoasters, they need hight, tall swooping drops, and ones that make you think i'll go over the cliff. All of that. Just because it uses the word "terrain" doesn't mean you build a coaster and lift the land up as high as u can go underneath it.

Keep workin at it though.

i'd call that "coaster-terrain."

somewhow, I didn't see enough of the coaster to comment...

But all those terreformed hills with th tree on them need to go....make the mountain more realistic--instead of the vertical towers of dirt, make the hills more smooth with a minimal mount of exposed vertical faces. The color of the dirt is over powering, and it's rerally taking away from the overall look....I suggest uadding another color into the landscape, like periwinkle-colored flowers might do. And definitely take out the fire, it doesn't fit at all.

The best part of the screenshots was the station....the flat land around it with the flat sections of track looks very nice....stick with it.

That huge first drop into the turn looks like it'd KILL!

Wait a sec.....
W-wasn't this a compo entry at TPV??
I thought I recognised that "Finish Line" rock arch from somewhere.....

that one drop in the coaster.... damn!
-JDP

the 1st drop is too unsmooth

People will die

rmm is right.

Ok, sure, its got the flaws others are pointing out. But I like the kinda atmosphere you got going on, thats funky ^_^

Kudos on that, and keep working on the coaster design - good job, eh? = )

When I picture woods, this screen does not look anything like it.

I hope those actually race nice and tight because if they do all I can say is FINALLY. By that I mean that there's an utter lack of solid coaster designers our there, particularly in rct2. We need more!

If they don't race well, then you've basically got nothing.

Ride6

Genius638: I'll be sure to add more screens up soon. I'm fairly new at the game, so I'm not exactly very good, but I accept your suggestions, and I'll try to work on them.

zodiac: Really? I myself thought it'd be fairly fun. Oh well. Thanks for the reply, though.

chinatown64: Yeah, I also posted it as a new thread over at TPV.

JDP: Which drop? The "S" turn drop?

matze: The first drop is just a straight drop. How can it be unsmooth?

RCTFan: Thanks. I'm sorry you don't like it.

Blitz: OK.

Lucifer: Thanks. I'm very glad you like it.

sixflagsfreak56: Oh. Is there anything I can work on?

Ride6: Well, towards the part by the second lift, I think the black train gets pretty far away from the brown, but at the second lift, they're right neck and neck. As of right now, I don't think any train has won twice in a row. So, thanks for the comment, and I'll see if I can get a download for you, to see if you like it.
Also, is there anything else I can work on?

Again, thanks for the comments, and I'll try to get an update as soon as possible.