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coaster roof- points for trying, but it just doesn't fit there.
the rest of the screen gives off a nice tranquility, and the coaster roof building just kinda ruins it. foliage behind the purple building is questionable, but the building itself looks quite nice.

the wooden coaster roof sucks. Sorry, but it does. Also, the random railings need fixing. Other than that, nothing to complain about.

It's okay. The coaster roof looks plain bad....and are the flowers dead or is that the color you chose? What color would they be?

That archway looks too unsupported on the left. Make the building higher so it is at least level with the top of the arch. Other than that, good (apart from some things others mentioned).

Metro

That roof looks like a hack for the sake of a hack. I mean, it looks awkward, its glitchy, and any other type of normal roof would suffice. I dont see why you chose to do that other than to proove that you can and/or to do something which few people would do.

Other than that, the carousel looks a bit no-thrills, the main building looks alright. The landscaping is a little bit too flat, and it doesnt really look like anything is 'going on' in that area, other than to fill a load of squares. Essentially, all I can see in that screen shot is a purple building and a bog standard no thrills fountain.

I dont mean to sound harsh with this post. Its just lacks personality and flair. Try breaking some rules, it works for me.

Well you have the wrong foliage, too many different types of trees.
Experiment with just using 2 or 3 trees. And making shurbs and jungle bushes denser. Your foilage will look better then.
Agreed with the coaster roof doesnt quite fit, but nice try.
The bridge could do with some supporting.

But its getting there.

Looks good, it has a nice atmosphere...
The first thing I have to point out is the foliage, it looks kinda random...I don't like neither the Chilean tree nor that jungle palm, whose name I don't know. Also, if I were you, I'd change the flowers...I'd put some yellow or dark red flowers, but not dull red flowers.
The buildings are ok. I like the colors you selected, they create a vivacious atmosphere. Although, I think that you could add some more details. For some reason, I'm not totally against the wooden coaster roof, but a redoing wouldn't be bad.
Anyway, it'd be interesting to see how you keep developing this park. Keep going JDP.

the coaster hack roof, looks not so good. The fact you just did it for the sake of hacking, by the looks of it, really is not good., the foliage doesn't do it for me at all.
I hate random pathing like that and its not done very well either imo.

There is too much of that light brown there for me. I can see your trying which is good. I am not keen on how you patterned that wall either the one with the silly roof... (woodcoaster) Honestly its not bad, but there are many things I could point out on that are really bugging me.

Phatage-Im gonna change it

smurf- Thank you

Camisado- i wanted to try something new. The fences are for the trees... trying to be creative

][ntamin22- thank you

Ling- thanks for the honest opinion...

Genius638- yeah, there dead lol. roof will change... im gonna post another screeen tho


Metropole- im might do something with that arch over the path... thanks man


Phil- I respect that phil. I try to something new with that hack but i didnt work. Ill probably leave the foutain. thanks buddy...

Leighx- the bridge aint done yet. As for the foilage,ill probably keep it for the fact i have also been told to try and work with many tree types and be creative.

RCFanB&M- Thanks. The flowers were orange but died. I might leave the foilage go, but yet still not sure about it.

JJ- well we all have opinions. there is some things in a park that both me too. As for the coaster roof, i just tried it out. It aint working so ill fix it up.

thanks for all the comments guys...
-JDP

Here is a couple older screens of the project...

ignore the name...







I got the idea for the coaster from this type of coaster http://www.rcdb.com/id1216.htm...

Enjoy the screens everyone...
-JDP

Edited by JDP, 31 October 2006 - 08:26 AM.

I like the ride and the station, but the foliage and the name don't make sense or have any flow with the ride.

Question: why did you exactly name the coaster "Merchant Gondola"?

Anyway, it looks nice. I like those structures you made over the track, but I don't like the pipes you put between them...well, I just don't like the pipes which are on the loop part.
There are some things on the foliage that I don't like: some trees don't fit, and you should add some more bushes.
Anyway, this screen is the most interesting, so far. Keep going.

I'm liking the ride, I like it when people do something new but still do something realistic. Don't worry to much about the name, doesn't a Japanese coaster need a random name to fit in such as Go Go Sneaker or Hill Billy Coaster Texas Bronco.

hillbilly coaster.....lmao

Interestign supports and landforming. I like the lift hill, but the loop I'm not digging. It should be more prominent, maybe over a pond or soemthing, instead of hidden in the mountaine. The architecture is very good an fits in with the theme of the coaster supports, nice job!

This i like very much. It's like an aqueduct gone wrong or something.
the tan integrats well enough with the brick, and, though the loop supports are a tad questionable, look generally pretty good.
who's with me that some brick quarter-tile rooves are needed for things like these arches?

Ling- um, okay, thanks for comment. Ill try to work on it...

RCFanB&M- Thanks man...

Leonardofury- thank you

Genius638- thanks for the comment man.

][ntamin22- Thank you too

heres a new screen everyone...

...enjoy...
-JDP

Everything in that screen is great except for the roof of the building in the center. I especially like the fountain and the paths as awning, although I'm sure someone will disagree with the latter.

Edited by zburns999, 11 November 2006 - 10:43 PM.

I like it all except for the bamboo poles sticking out of the roof

ohhh im the one to disagree. i know people will disagree with what i say but i just dont like the paths for awnings. to me thats a LL look and therefore should be kept in LL unless you doing a LL park in RCT2. with so much at your hands try doing something more creative for awnings. i dont really like the poles coming out of the roof. they hold no purpose and dont look that good. also that building looks like a two colored block. try adding some windows and doors ad details. i like the look of what i think is a resturante but its coverd in bushes that block the view of the detail. i also think that alot of those bushes should be kept on the ground. IMO none of your buildings have pattern to them. also try to break up your path with some different types of path. right now its just a see of brown. hope that helps. keeping working at it.


FK+Coastermind

It looks good, just needs a little touching up here and there .

I think the roof in the centre is too bare, maybe put a fence around it? And the foliage needs some work from what I can see. The buildings themselves look quite good though.