(Archive) Advertising District / New un-named park

Well, I think I'm ready to show my park on here. I am pretty confident with how this is going so comments and criticism would be nice. It is un-named at the moment, so if you have any suggestions, please tell me. So here we go. The screens are WIPs just to tell you.


^This is the park's inverted impulse coaster, Aharo.


^The park's ferris wheel.

I really like the waterfalls that I have going on. I think that they look good.

So, again, comments and criticism appreciated!

not much to see, but im like it, looks like a preety cool coaster

hope to seem more of this soon

Looks interesting...
The supports are ok, in structure terms, but if I were you, I'd make paint them another color, you shouldn't make the the track and the supports with the same colors. The building in the first screen looks ok, although I think you could work a little bit more on it, because it's too simple...add some details.
Yeah, the waterfalls look good...Looking forward to see how you develop this park, keep going.

Use some other textures for the buildings along with some other colors or else this will get very dull, very fast

I pretty much agree with everything that's been said so far. I'm not really a fan of those supports. I'd change the colors, and maybe use some different objects to build them. Toon's supports, maybe? Not a bad start though.

I like it but the colors and landscape didn't stand out enough, IMO

EDIT - Fixed spelling mistakes. You try typing with one free hand and a dog laying on your other one.

Edited by Gwazi, 24 September 2006 - 10:37 AM.