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hi guys^^

this is my 13th park, 'Port Royal'

and next is my friend's park, 'Another Day'

made by 4ever

Edited by Zenosbried, 15 August 2006 - 12:50 AM.

good

the first one... well it looks good but i am missing the big port... you know
and i am a bit confused of the roofless 2x2 walls on the big wall

the second park looks extremely like bijou magique, quite good but a bit too look a like

park one: i think you need to vary your colors, all the archy is the same color. too many windows. the mcdonalds sign looks a little out of place as well. its a good start, but finish a little more before you show your next screens.

park two: really now, that cant be a coincidence...

The first park is was to unfinished to give a just opinion on, but from whats there it looks pretty good. I think if you added more color to everything it would add to it and a few more details and different types of textures and windows would also be nice here.

The second park has some pretty nice archy in places but over all it is really bland and lacks color. I know it supposed to be a jungle feel but it just seems to be missing something

and next is my friend's park, 'Another Day'

made by 4ever

that should answer your question danieL

The 1st park looks good...
I don't like too much the landscaping, and I think that you could add some more colors. I also suggest making more different buildings, I mean, the architecture is nice, but the buildings are too similar...anyway, you made a good job.

The 2nd park is also ok...
The structures are quite good but some of them look kinda messy. It has a nice atmosphere, although not vivacious, because of the colors I guess...The color for the buildings are ok, but I think you could change the color for the coasters...use some accent colors. The foliage is also nice.
Anyway...it shows a lot of effort. Well done.

What was your old name?



1st park is very unlike other parks (in terms of architecture styles). Looks great.

2nd park is a little tough to look at, as everything is one color. It's visually impressive the way the rides interact with the architecture, but because of this I can't tell whether the architecture was built around the rides or the rides were tailored to get this effect (compromising the layouts).

I thought i was looking at bijou magique in that second park

Would be nice if there was somthing in there he put together himself, instead of copying every colour/texture/fence

Lol i thought it was Turtles park aswell (2nd screens)


The first screen looks interesting i would just like to see how you are going to do the front of the wall.
As for the gate i really like that, its magnificent.

Though the buildings in all screens need to be more different they are all too samey, such as too many windows and doors.

But overall looks like its coming together.

I love the drops on the woodie and the splash boats, how they are interacted with the scenery.

I LOVE the scale you are using for that first park, looks really commanding. Can't wait to see how it turns out, actually.

I'm not going to comment on the second park, I guess it does look a bit like mine.

1st screen- Looks good, even though unfinished. Im looking past it being unfinished and i think it really looks like you got something there. But please get rid of the McDonalds sign. Keep at it.

2nd screen- When i first started to look at it, it looked good. But then the screens went on and it just kept repeating itself.
-JDP

You say it's your 13th park... do you have any other parks up for download?

Holy cow! Your friend looks like he could have sent his park in and may have had a chance for Runner-Up. Your park, once finished looks just the same, maybe even, dare I say it, Spotlight worthy... Great scale is my best comment right now. Orthodox, yes, but executed very well. Please finish your park, Z. Congrats to your friend, too.

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and Gungz's shots^^

Edited by Zenosbried, 15 August 2006 - 12:56 AM.

Maybe you should stick to showing only your park and your friend's? I think Camisado meant your personal parks when he asked to see some other parks for download.

Ehm, that last one is by Guljam.

I remember seeing the rct3 park and cave story on this site. The other park does not do nothing for me. It looks a bit sloppy imo.
-JDP