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  • CoasterForce%s's Photo
    Good, but the foliage in front of the building is just like a mess.
  • Ge-Ride%s's Photo
    It's blocks, poles and windows put together to randomly form a facade. IMO, if you took off all the double half pole pieces stuck on the walls and made the whole thing either white or brown, it would look ten times better.
  • Akasha%s's Photo
    A bit too crowded if you ask me. The double poles and windows are a bit overused imo. Nice tropical feel though.
  • newk%s's Photo
    i think it looks pretty nice. when you surround the whole area with similar foliage i'll look great.
  • PBJ%s's Photo
    nice but way to much wooden poles
  • trav%s's Photo
    Today is my birthday, so here is a birthday screen! :)

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  • X250%s's Photo
    Happy birthday!

    Firstly, i love all the little mini-games and stuff on the buildings, looks really cool. My only problem with the screen is how repetative the upper section of all the buildings are, vary the textures or even the window style a bit- and don't use so many windows either.

    Heres an idea, if you want the paths to snap the the edges of the buildings, absolute all clearances and stick an invisible path on the outside of the concrete path, so there are no gaps inbetween the shops and the path. =)

    -X-
  • Levis%s's Photo
    happy birthday :) .

    this is a nice screenshot, the walls look very nice but I don't like the glass by the monorail :( .
  • zodiac%s's Photo
    :birthday: have a good one

    as for the screen, i like it......thats all i have to say :D
  • lucas92%s's Photo
    Happy birthday Trav! :birthday:

    The roof is kinda weird there: Posted Image

    Nice overall screen. :D
  • inVersed%s's Photo
    I am really impressed with your work and the improvement you have shown, just finish something and you'll have a sweet park on your hands. The details in your work is very nice and it has a nice atmosphere
  • twister12%s's Photo
    it looks nice. love the minigames, but lucas is right about the roof. good job overall :)
  • Lloyd%s's Photo
    Lucas92 - I think he's going for the facade look, so that might be why it looks like that.

    Looks fine to me man. I've liked pretty much all of the screens you've shown so far, and those mini games are a neat idea.

    I'm in agreement with Levis about the glass though. The colours are off.
  • RCT_Master%s's Photo
    ^I agree.
  • RCFanB&M%s's Photo
    Happy Birthday! :party:

    I like the atmosphere of this park...
    I also like the fact that the architecture is well detailed, although it's too repetitive...you could make some changes.
    The mini-games are pretty cool, they're a nice detail. The only suggestion is making some variations on the buildings, for making that area look more interesting.
    Anyway, I'm looking forward to more updates :) Keep going.
  • Tom_Dj%s's Photo
    damn i really like that last screen , nice atmosphere too ;)
  • trav%s's Photo
    Thanks everyone, I have changed some of the windows to make it look less repetitive and have made the path go right up to the edge of the building.

    New screen, not much, but I don't want to show much of this area...

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  • JDP%s's Photo
    Eh, it's not too bad. Im not feeling you tree selection and the color blue you used in this screen. I dont know what the white spot is on that roof either.
    -JDP
  • tracidEdge%s's Photo
    hmm. i'm not a big fan of your tree selection.

    from what else i can see, it doesn't looks too bad. maybe tone done the blue a little, but that's it, really.
  • Gwazi%s's Photo
    Wait... This is a park? I like it.

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