(Archive) Advertising District / Lucas92 (me) entry for Park Wars ***New Update***

Company name: LucasFusion Enterprise

Park Name: Unknow

Right now, I'm building my entry for ParkWars.

There is the first coaster in my park: Thunder Rock


http://www.rctd.ft6....s/Parkwars1.png

Edited by lucas92, 05 August 2006 - 11:44 AM.

How the hell are you able to still upload screen to that site? Rctd stopped working for me a good long time ago, like months ago...

Maybe it's the brower...

Ride6

How the hell are you able to still upload screen to that site?  Rctd stopped working for me a good long time ago, like months ago...

Maybe it's the brower...

Ride6

http://www.rctd.ft6.com/uploads/index.php

--> http://www.rctd.ft6....loads/index.php

Edited by elby, 28 May 2006 - 01:55 PM.

There is the Thunder Rock entrance: http://www.rctd.ft6....s/Parkwars2.png

ps. criticism is welcome, don't be affraid.

The lattice going over the station seems as if its floating and the foliage just seems as a filler to the left of the screen.

I like the station you've got but the other building needs a bit more. No complaints about the coaster on this screen. Good work.

JK

Edited by J K, 31 May 2006 - 08:25 AM.

The coaster seems to have a nice layout. Good job.

That's a weird optical illusion on that diagonal hill going through the building. I like that lattice on the station, though.

Thanks for the comments! I'll show you a better angle of the station later.

Your form is good, but the colors throw me off. Keep the brown, but try something darker for where there's white.

EDIT: 1,337th post! Sweet!

Edited by laz0rz, 31 May 2006 - 03:21 PM.

I keep the brown but do I remove the white or I make a mix? What's better?

Probably a mix. There are places where the white looks good, but it clashes with itself a little bit when it overlaps.

Edited by laz0rz, 31 May 2006 - 05:28 PM.

i think you should take out the brown, maybe make it a pale green or pale red, but no white. but besides that i think that screen is awesome. you have a very nice station there.

There is the other angle of the station (I changed some colors).

http://www.rctd.ft6....s/parkwars3.png

Criticism is always welcome.

interesting. i like it.

looks good, but the spanish fence near the top of the station building look way too flimsy. Really like the coasters colors.

Spanish fence on the top of the station?

They are holding up the highest roof of the station.

There's a preview of the main street: http://www.rctd.ft6....s/Parkwars4.png

Whats with the red vines on that building?

I'm not too fond of the buildings, but otherwise looks ok. The woodie is looking nice, I'll admit.

What's wrong with the use of vines?