Released / Insular Insomnia by Todd Lee & Mama Bear

Heh, I like those umbrellas. Although if it was me i'd move that tree, because it looks like it's growing out of the umbrella from this view.

It's been a while, sorry... Mama and I have been very busy with other things!


Enjoy!!

Really like the modern style, although the colors make it looks kinda boring (I guess there is too much white). The foliage is ok, but you could put other-color flowers, I mean, not the same colors that the building.
Anyways...it's pretty nice, with a pleasant atmosphere. BTW, what is that building? a hotel?
Keep going.

Edited by RCFanB&M, 03 August 2006 - 10:58 AM.

Yeah I think maybe with the flowers you could afford to have some red or something. But overall I actually like the predominantly white look - it gives it that real modern, sleek look. Nice work.

I like the structure, the windows worked out great there. However I hate the foliage, it just seems unthoughout and just didnt turn out well

Does your hotel not have floors? For the fact i can see the ground through the windows... Other wise i think that it looks nice. Modern, as the others said. Only big problem is those plants on the hotel, they look like shit.
-JDP

I like the shape of the hotel, very different from the others. Only thing that I really dislike is the grey color on the awnings... Please, replace it by black or white! The large plants don't really disturb me, in fact, these are from the original game so very nice use of these!

This park looks like a Vacantion Park, will you (Todd Lee and Mama Bear) send it to VP?

Edited by lucas92, 02 August 2006 - 05:30 PM.

Yeah looks promising to me.

I'm not sure about the type of doors you have used, although, i've never been a fan of them. Maybe even open doorways would look good? If not, i think glass might add to the modern look you've got going on. The colours have grown on me though, At first i thought, 'maybe a bit too much white' but i think it looks good.

Just sort out that foilage and it will be a very pleasant screen. I'd say to use the largest palm available as opposed to that dead tree you've got now.

Keep it up.

Those ferns on the roof don't bother me nearly as much as the planters underneath them. Sorry, but they just don't look good.

For the building itself - very well done. Perhaps a second accent? (blue or green, methinks.) Also, I think some sort of railing around the skylights wouldn't be a bad idea (don't want someone doing a Jackass stunt there, lol.)

I agree with InVersed. The foliage needs a bit of work... hack bushes under that tree, for instance. The white flowers blend into the building's structure a bit too much as well - may want to work with that.

Not trying to be too critical - looking good so far.

-ACE

i really like the way you used those fences as windows , good job

As you may recall, our photographer Albert has been missing for a few months now. The Island detectives have found numerous clues concerning his where abouts. Most of the clues indicate that Albert is still on the Island...

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Edited by Todd Lee, 16 August 2006 - 10:48 AM.

That looks pretty good, with a nice atmosphere. Just one suggestion: use some decoration objects for making paths on the little bridge.
Anyway...this looks very good, so far...when is the release date/month (approximately)...may we know that?

Looks nice. I love the use of fences like on the bridge on the right. Very creative.

Edited by OLE, 16 August 2006 - 12:38 PM.

Nice detail... very small screen, cant really say much besides it looks good.
-JDP

Nice work you two! Glad to see another T&M project, make Todd build something for a change...

I particulary liked some of the white buildings on page 2/3 with the supports, and the idea of the story involved is something that I've always supported/done/encourage.

I look forward to more!

Kai

Believe it or not, I AM building in this park! Can you guess which of the screens are mainly mine? (I say mainly, because Mama and I really intertwine our work. )

Happy to see an update. It looks nice, great atmosphere and color blend as well.
-JDP

Looks nice...
I really like the style and colors of your buildings...it creates a great atmosphere for the park...I'd just change the fences for the balconies. I think there're some things on foliage you could change, but it's not that bad. Looking forward to more updates. Keep going

Nice work you two. I like the guide rails for the splash down.