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  • RMM%s's Photo
    Damn I love skittles. Especially the wild berry ones... :kiss: .

    Edited by RMM, 04 April 2006 - 06:33 PM.

  • Regulatin%s's Photo
    JKay just took the word's right out of my mouth... Well, erm, post. :p

    You need to understand, that you are still doing the 2X2 buildings. It's jsut that you add little arches to the side. Use a different base structure, I mean look at this screen of my building.

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    I'm not saying it's better, I'm just saying that it has a different shape. Your's is a 2X2 block with some extra detail on the side. I'm trying to help, so don't start yelling at me please. :huey:
  • Corkscrewed%s's Photo
    Oh yeah! Well that's just six 2x2 bldg's smashed together!!!!


    J/K You have a point.
  • Regulatin%s's Photo

    Oh yeah!  Well that's just six 2x2 bldg's smashed together!!!!
    J/K  You have a point.

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    Hey punk. :p
  • postit%s's Photo
    swing and a miss on the castle.

    way too cluttered and complicated.
  • Jazz%s's Photo
    Thanks for your worthless, immature comments, except for JKay and Thrice who actually explained their reasoning.
    Mods please close this topic.

    Thanks.

    ~Jazz~

    Edited by Jazz, 05 April 2006 - 12:34 PM.

  • Akasha%s's Photo
    I do like this actually, if I don't pay attention to the colours, the grey-red-yellow just kills it. I like your style though. And it isn't as random as the first screen. I love that little flag, and if you could make the castle's colours somewhat duller (don't know a real good word for it), you could add more flags, which I think would be a very nice touch. But you quit on it so what the hell.
  • Trajan%s's Photo
    Not feelin' it so much anymore. Something about it has lost its appeal. I think it's the fact that you're in the 2x2 style right now. The structure itself is very well built, but somewhere, it's lost the spontaneous feel that you had earlier seemingly in an effort to make things a little less chaotic.
  • Marshy%s's Photo
    i think its pretty bad, its too random and the colours clash too much. this screen kinda dissapoints me as i was really looking forward to this update.

    keep at it though, im sure the park will turn out great

    btw, dont give up
  • Xenon%s's Photo
    There's just something I love about brick buildings. It's pretty good; simple design and color, not overfull with architecture, and a nice roof.
  • JJ%s's Photo
    you're looking at the wrong screen.
  • Leighx%s's Photo
    well i dont think it looks like a castle
    and just because its a castle doesnt mean it has to be on a massive scale. i think tone it down and you could add clouds made from TT blocks around the base and gardens? and as it is the corner you could stack walls up to make a picture so it isnt black?

    not too bad though..... i'll be watching this one.
  • X250%s's Photo
    I think it looks okay, its your style and it looks pretty cool from this angle. Don't give up because a few people don't like it, if that was the case nothing would get done around here lol. I don't know why people are always so negative about 2x2 buildings anyway... They can be made to look pretty cool if done right.

    One thing i will say though, a thing i've noticed with your parks... Is that you tend to like to build high structures in the corners of your parks, thats fine, however you need to take into consideration what the structure will look like from other angles, i can't really comment on it because i only see the one angle, but just take it into consideration. You have a very recognisable style which is good, you just need to adapt it further. Its a step in the right direction though, keep moving forward!

    -X-
  • matheck%s's Photo
    Hey

    I like your buildings, i think the architecture is very good but if the colours
    were changed it would look even better! I think you should leave this kind
    of pink and you could use more yellow instead of blue!

    But go on, i like it abd i'm looking forward the park!

    Matheck

    Edited by matheck, 07 April 2006 - 03:31 AM.

  • Metropole%s's Photo
    I appreciate how long and how much effort that must have taken to make, but I'm just not a fan of it. It's hard to put my finger on it but there are lots of things in it that I don't like such as the red bridges leading to it, the over 2x2ness of it (though it's not as bad as some people seem to be making out) and the pink that clashes with the maroon. I wouldn't call it a castle either.

    Anyway, as requested, I'll close the topic, but feel free to pm me if you want it back open

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