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hey turtle, i like that quote in your sig. yeah, i just noticed it..

I don't know who this Engimatic guy you're talking about is.  I just thought this looked really really sloppy and ugly.  I personally hate this sort of fantasy schmantasy theme, and frankly, it looks exactly like someone threw up on it. 

But hey, if those of you with lower standards want to pick a fight, then I pity you.

it looks as though you have the same birthday as him, by some random strike of luck.

it looks as though you have the same birthday as him, by some random strike of luck.

Not fuckin' smart.

Actually, it's a month off, but he's not fooling anybody.

I love Mario! Nice concept and lovin' the colors. Can't wait to see how it progresses.

Keep it up!

[PM]

OMG THIS IS REALLY COOL! DO YOU WANT TO BE ON MY PARK SUPER MEGAWORLD IT'S THE BEST PARK EVAR AND IT WILL BE SUPER JUST LIKE YOUR SUPER MARIO PARK GET IT THEY'RE BOTH SUPER LOL1!!!!

Who drank all the damn Gatorade!?!?!? No wait, that was SU182!

LOL GATORADE IS TEH GOODZ!!! I REALLY LIKE THE NEW RAIN GATORADE IT TASTES YUMMY!!!

He did drink the Gatorade.

Anyways, the park uses to many different color schemes, as you were told, I don't mind the mushrooms, but could you fix the flowers?

ok the april fools thing was a good effort but you didn't have to ruin someones park topic with it did you?

the screen is really attractive, and theres lots to look at. My favourite part of it is the bottom right where the coaster dives in and out of the rocks. In the whole screen the only think i would change is the glass, i dont think it really suits.

Marshy

I really dont like it. I feel its too much going on here and you have no theme what so ever. Way to many types of roofs and themes. But i do like the coaster layout, you did a nice job with that.
-JDP

i love everything except for anything and everything to do with the paths.

Why isn't Jazz replying to anything?

Why isn't Jazz replying to anything?

Maybe because, unlike you, his life does not revolve around this forum.

Maybe because, unlike you, his life does not revolve around this forum.

lol hypocrisy.

I don't know how you did it, but if ever a park was to be themed to the Super Mario video games, this would be it. It is immaculate.

Thanks for the comments everyone, they're greatly appreciated.
Unforuntately, this park will probably end up being stopped, since I have lost motivation to continue it; I have other ideas I'm working on.

There is still a chance I may continue it, however its probably quite doubtful. So, I decided to show a screen of probably my biggest architectural accomplishment to date, Princess Peach's Palace. I wasn't going to show this... but I decided to show it anyways since I'll probably end up deleting this park. Anyways...

~ Shown here is Princess Peach's Palace, a beautiful castle dominating the area with its grand size and elegance. Also seen are a few buildings near it, as well as a peek of the Grand Carosuel as well: ~



This is sort of a "bonus" screen, and I couldn't do a "closeup" screen, since the whole palace didn't fit within the view.

Sorry again for this not being continued... but I'm happy to say it's for a good cause, with other good ideas planned in the future.

Comments are appreciated...

~Jazz~

Edited by Jazz, 04 April 2006 - 04:06 PM.

Also, please ignore the large "black" area around the screen, as I can't "white" the black areas out when editing the screen.
Thanks in advance.

~Jazz~

Edited by Jazz, 04 April 2006 - 04:31 PM.

You should have made it look like a castle.

-Ryan

If I were to be brutally honest, (which I will be) this looks like a big blob of buildings doused with ketchup and mustard. Not very castle-like and its really not my cup of tea. You took a major risk by using the red/yellow scheme, and, imo, it failed terribly. The red/yellow scheme is really difficult to pull off in my experience though. Also, your same 2x2 tendencies are still apparent here in your architecture, albeit in less glorified manner due to the size of the buildings. The blob of buildings totally reminds me of something leighx would build.

Despite this screen being a let down for me, its still shame to see you gave up on this park, Jazz. I was really hoping you'd actually finish something of decent size to follow up your surprising PT park, but I guess I was mistaken. Oh well. I guess I'm still excited to see what you come up with next.