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The first screen is the best of the bundle. The rest seem a little empty, but still nice.

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i'm gonna agree with parkmaker here and say the first screen is really the only good one. but the foliage needs a little more organization; it seems, other than the flowers, that you just tossed some bushes down and called it done. actually, that could be said for most of these screens.

I love it when people use creative windows like you did in the first screen. I also like the earthy feel you have in this batch. Unlike the other guys, I actually like the open look; it works especially well in the fifth scrren.

You've really progressed here.

Don't like it much. This seems like a perfect example of the half-ass parkmaking that people call "realistic". Theres nothing special in there that makes me go, "Thats cool, its just like in real life". It just seems like you build a boring coaster with long turns and w/ custom supports and then put grass underneath and say its "realistic". I honestly think it looks half-ass. Put some more time and thougth and I'm sure you'd make it something great but now, its don't look much but a bunch of coasters on flat land.

Don't like it much.  This seems like a perfect example of the half-ass parkmaking that people call "realistic".  Theres nothing special in there that makes me go, "Thats cool, its just like in real life".  It just seems like you build a boring coaster with long turns and w/ custom supports and then put grass underneath and say its "realistic".  I honestly think it looks half-ass.  Put some more time and thougth and I'm sure you'd make it something great but now, its don't look much but a bunch of coasters on flat land.

heehee, you said it man =D

November 2004

The Junior Coaster was so ugly so I have chanched it.

Well... it all looks kind of nice...
The relatively bare piece of dirt above the path in the last picture does bother me a little bit, though...
But you've got an unforgivable mistake in your park...
It has to be Superman l'Attraction d'Amsterdam., not Superman Le Attraction Amsterdam. ^^

Man, this stuff reminds me of RCTNW and old school RCT2. I'm really liking the park so far, but atm, can't provide much feedback. One thing though, will you have buildings and such to create a more... "park-like" atmosphere?

Edited by Rhynos, 26 June 2006 - 10:05 AM.

Looks good...
Nice work with the fencing of the paths, and also the landscaping. The layout of the coaster is ok, but the atmosphee is so dead.
Oh...is your park going to have a main street or something with the basic buildings (Restaurant, Souvenirs, Park Info, etc.) ?

The coaster looks a bit aimless but that's just me nitpicking.
A more pressing concern would be the threat of flooding from that water. It's being held back by half-a-height-mark's-worth of battlements?

Again, nice earthy tones, wonderful scenery placement, and great fences. This definately looks like a winner.

That looks really nice! The waterfalls are creative.

I agree...but where does the water come from?

Boring screen, bobo. Looks like there barely anything there. The water falls look too out of place i feel.
-JDP

What's there is pretty good, but as someone else had mentioned, this park really needs some buildings and shops, or at least something that makes it feel more like an amusement park. All I see are coasters, rides, and paths. What's there is good though.

It kind of ruins the beauty of the little pond/lake..

The waterfall seems to fall from midair. That's a little strange.