(Archive) Advertising District / Egyptian Paradise

Ok guys. This is my first park I am submitting here. Now, keep in mind; I am still a beginner. Most likely I will get bashed, but please try to keep it 'Constructive Critisism' only. Please, if your going to call me out on something, please give me a suggestion on how to fix my problem.Here are all my screens so far, I hope you like em.

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So do I have any potential what-so-ever, or am i dead in the water

Nice station for that mouse coaster. But I don't really like the scenery piece for the top of the tower. It doesn't really fit with the desert theme you have here.

Everything else looks fine.

Oh and it was a good idea to make the park peep friendly.

Happy Building!

/Parkmaker

Edited by parkmaker, 03 February 2006 - 06:48 PM.

Here is a peace of Arch. that took me about 40 min, I think it's my best yet. I hope you like it.

I actually really like your building forms, as they're pretty unique/out of the ordinary. Most of the textures you've chosen go together well, which also adds to the screens.

Unfortunately, however, I can't say the same about your color choices, or your choices of building materials. The marble balconies and slopes look awful, as do the choices of flowers. I don't recommend using a marble texture on the same level as a castle texture, especially when that marble texture is grey colored. The roofing needs work, as those grey and orange tile roofs don't fit in at all, especially at the angles you've got them at. Finally, that giant dome you've got at the top of the tower doesn't fit in with RCT scenery, so while it does seem the best shape for the location, it isn't at all the best piece.

To summarize: work on the roofing, as well as the arrangement of textures. Also the color choices, and foilage. Most importantly, lose the marble "sidewalks."

It is infact, really good for a first time effort. Certainly a lot better than most peoples attempts, it shows a lot of promise. I can see what your trying to do, but it needs some good custom scenery to pull off properly. Click here for the standard PT2 bench, has everything you will ever need!
You need to work on texture co-ordination and colour scheming, just look at a few parks around NE's spotlight/runner-ups section to get an idea of how this is achieved. Or you can have a go for yourself, good luck!

-X-

Basically, I would have said what they said, but I think there should also be some height differences between the buildings: gives the park a more 3-D look, if you will.

Oh, and would you mind doing something with that fried chicken stall; it's just sitting there naked.

Ok! Thanks a lot for the comments. Also, thats for the download. And yes, I took all my naked stalls out and put them inside buildings. I'm not going to change what I already have, I am just going to apply your critisism on my future builds

OH BTW, that download is awesome! Got everything i'd need. The only thing is, I am already on this park so I can't just start a new one. UNLESS, there is some way to transfer that scenery pack into the scenery for the park i'm doing right now. But yea, I'll DEF use that download for my next park.

Here are a couple of SS's of my New B&M Floorless and it's station. Now keep in mind, I still need to build scenery buildings AROUND my coasters. I just haven't gotten to it. I've had a lot to do in th past two days.

Hmm, definitely "beginner-ish", but I think it shows loads of potential. Your building forms are, well, strange to say the least, but I can tell you're having fun with it and I really like the enormity of structures. Not many people are willing to attempt such large, obscure buildings, which my style has in common with yours.

So in hindsight, I'd definitely keep at this and try to finish it. I think the learning curve will only increase with time and practice.

Thanks. Also, I know this isnt my BEST work. I mean if I was really hard-core and dedicated to this project, i'm sure I could create better structures. But I'm like you saidm having fun and trying to be unique and trying to make SS's to please you guys. Also, I'm glad you think I have potential. See I'm not a beginner to the game, i've played this game for a WHILE. Just not with scenery/themeing.

you've definitely improved over the past set of screenshots. however your coasters need work; they're very unrealistic.

Umm it isnt suppose to be realistic. its suppose to be a coaster with great results. and thats what it is lol

^forget stats just make it look well. Unless you have something like 11.48 intensity. Fix it up a bit though.

You can make coasters that are realistic, cool to look at, and have the best stats, too. It is in fact possible, contrary to the "experts" opinions....just look at my coasters.....

Just keep working on them and im sure theyll turn out great!

Edited by ride_exchanger, 08 February 2006 - 06:37 PM.

Hmm, definitely "beginner-ish", but I think it shows loads of potential.  Your building forms are, well, strange to say the least, but I can tell you're having fun with it and I really like the enormity of structures.  Not many people are willing to attempt such large, obscure buildings, which my style has in common with yours.

So in hindsight, I'd definitely keep at this and try to finish it.  I think the learning curve will only increase with time and practice.

I think JKay hit's the nail on his head...

but I can tell you're having fun with it

this is where it is all about... i can't say i like it but have fun and there will come more and better things out of your hands!

Ok, so my computer is kind of old and we are going to buy a new one soon and leave this one to my mom. But recently she just bought the newest Software for Hallmark Card Studio, it takes up ALL OF our space. So I had to go through a run and un-install/delete anything I didn't REALLY need. So I had to take all my PC Games off including Age of Empires 2 and it's expansion pack along with others as well as... *Tears* RCT2!!! So I don't think you guys will see my updating my work soon... I'm really sorry.