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Way too busy.
I can't even focus...

Thats just weird, its a total mess, but in a good kinda way.

Honestly, I can only agree with the first 2/3's of that statement. Far too much random for me. But, I do like the pots as lamps throughout.

That's way too busy.

Well I like it and am an NE Parkmaker, so there!

Kumba (both times): Thanks...
hobbes: I can see why you think it that way, it's supposed to have that "overcrowded" look with all of the old mine scenery and what not.
Xcoaster: Thanks... those pots were designed to be mine lanterns.
-Montu...: See what I said to hobbes.

Any other comments are welcome...

It seems you got distracted with the small details and overlooked the big picture. Nothing seems cohesive. You have so much going on. You have too many different textures, shapes, and trees. I can't tell what the theme or concept is. But at the same time the screen does show great potential. Like I said you focused on the details and they look really well done. If you can focus on a theme and idea I think you have the talent to make something really great.

ehh its ok. i really do think it looks too busy and nothing like a gold mine. but it does look good. and i see something familiar at the bottom... some type of building i see in every screen you show

doesn't really look like a mine at all, if you ask me.

It seems you got distracted with the small details and overlooked the big picture.

Exactly. I couldn't have said it better myself...nothing fits together and altogether it looks terrible. Nothing in that screen resembles a mine, either. You need to stop posting screens and spend more time focusing on your skills, because you have the capability to be something great, but it seems as if you thrive on doing the same clutter and seeking continous feedback from it.

Thanks for the comments guys.

After reading Fenix's and CF's posts, I completely agree with you two. I should focus on my skills before starting another park.

Just to prove my point, mods, could you please close this topic.

Thanks,
~Jazz~

Don't listen to the people who say it's too random! I love this kind of thought-out clutter - there are so many fun details to check out. At first glance it might not look harmonious or whatever, but who cares if it's a bit hard to look at. Just look harder.

I like it. Finish it.

Its mind-bogglingly random, I love it!

-X-

Usually with screens you view them again and again and they get boring after a while and you start to see flaws. With this i did'nt like it at first but ive started to admire some of the stuff.

It's not amazing but it's good i just don't think you've found your style yet. You should really finish this you only learn things from finishing things or trying them out. I believe if you finished this you'd see most of your flaws and improve quite a bit.

Look at all the action in that screen. Very good John.