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After working more on the Jurrasic Park section i believe that a couple of the other areas (namely the marvel area) are lacking so im thinking about starting them again because i think i could execute them alot better than i have done.

Hmm. I think the Marvel-Screen was just perfect.

I too thought the Marvel area was excellent, but if you can do better, i'd be happy to see it!

Jurassic Park looks nice, takes a bit of getting used to, though.

wow, your work is very creative, it has great jurasic feel, great use of the cage fence and the tree layout is awesome

Quick Update

I have removed the marvel area and the area with the duelers as i am starting these again. I have begun work on a market area to the left of the port of entry and it features a Mythos style restaurant that i am quite proud of. I will show a screen soon, im trying to hold off on advertising now ive shown quite alot now.

Thanks

I hope that you're critical-ness doesn't get in the way of your building, because honestly, the Marvel area looked very, very good to me.

I hope that you're critical-ness doesn't get in the way of your building, because honestly, the Marvel area looked very, very good to me.

It wont im so inspired with this park it will get finished.
Progress is going well, time for a new screen.

This is the area to the left of the port of entry. It is meant to be the shopping section of the park and will feature a range of shops and restaurants and even a spot for guests to try their hand at fishing.



Thanks for all the comments so far

it looks great, but i think the buildings could use a color that stands out more than yellow. it's all very brown right now--too brown if you ask me.

I actually disagree with tracid, I think the simple colors are natural and gorgeous. Really, I wouldn't change much of anything, except possibly that little tower on the middle far left - it looks a bit too simple, but I'm not exactly sure what you could do to make it better. The entire screen is magnificent, though.

I like it a lot. I think the brown n yellow is good. Its nice... dunno wat else to say.

I'd change the sand under the pathing, it clashes with the rooves. Apart from that, excellent.

Update

The Toons are on vacation.......





Welcome to Toon Island, the toons have broken away from their town and founded their own island. Filled with many wacky and weird wonders and places of amazement. Enjoy your stay on Toon Island!

Edited by Loopy, 08 March 2006 - 12:03 PM.

Update
The Toons are on vacation.......

But I thought he just got back from vacation... hehe


Anyway, Loops. Great screen, best so far imo. Some of the more refreshing LL work I've seen in awhile with really solid theming that remains convincing. Good stuff. Can't wait for more now.

Not bad and that is a really hard theme, what I think would help is less trees, mainly in the center island of buildings on the right of it there.

And im still waiting for my tester version

And im still waiting for my tester version

It will be in your inbox sometime in the next couple of days

Hmm... I really don't know what to think. Theres part of me that don't really like it, kinda like the red paths make it some what annoying but then at the same time I sort of like it. Maybe its just a bad spot for a screen for me.

i think it could benefit with more flowers by the path. otherwise, very nice.

very nice color blend. Looks good, but one thing though, whats with the woodie coaster track at the bottem right hand corner?
-JDP

very nice color blend. Looks good, but one thing though, whats with the woodie coaster track at the bottem right hand corner?
-JDP

Its for roofing i didnt realise it was there sorry about that

Two words, God damn.