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Blasphemy I tell ye!

Ha.
Sorry, his JP was terrible. BUT, I loved the flyer and its terrain interaction, so there.

Marvel Island = good. I liked it. Nice work, and you stated that it didn't even have all the details.

The Jurassic Park, eh, too bland, too uncreative. That looks like almost every other Jurassic Park I've ever seen.

I think the biggest complaint I have about general Jungle theming, is that unless you are really careful with the tree selection, it can look horrible.

I'd change the coaster colours. You seem to have the rest sorted in your mind, so that's good.

I hate the way people have the straight track piece in between the 2 half corkscrews on cobra rolls. It drives me nuts. It would completely ruin the weightlessness feeling that element gives, and it just looks flat out ugly.

I guess I'm just more of a realist.

Edited by geewhzz, 16 January 2006 - 05:45 AM.

Okay as promised a redo of the Jurassic Park area. Pretty much all the landscaping is the same it was just adding to it, changing of the flower colour scheme and the path style (thanks Kumba for suggesting that)

Anyways what does everyone think now?

It looks alot better!

But I think some of the stuff placed on the path looks a bit too random..

-Ryan

Yes i think that aswell but the cage looks great, it makes the area look very jurrasic now. Great foliage and landscaping.

You need to remove the foliage underneath the cage rails that block their supports so the supports show up and it will all look cooler.

Some "fence posts" for the caging there would be good, and run them all the way down closer to the ground...

Otherwise I think I may be in love. It's much fresher.

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I really like that last screen but I think you should be a little more creative with the fences. Extend them to the ground and maybe add a little more detail here and there. Other than that it looks great.

^Yeah i'll agree with that, they sould sorta meet. You could do the coaster rails lower or the fences higher, or a little of both. Also I don't really like the super bright red for the supports, maybe try dull red.

Also out of all the members here I mite have been to IoA the most and tho I never planned to make my own I did go once and take loads of pics in the park for Toon, to help with his IoA, but then he hibernated in his snow cave... So if you want I can send you some copys and tell you lots about the real IoA, but id need to be a tester and see the park of coruse

So... what exactly will that mid-air cage keep in?
Everything looks much, much better, but either make the rails extend to the ground or let the supports act as vertical beams in the cage.

Otherwise, it's just an small obstacle for the terrorizing dinosaurs!

i have never seen that color scheme work as well as it does here. congrats on that.

and i also like the shit on the path.

Looks great. Maybe change the base color on the coaster, it's kind of bothering me; but it's not a necessary change.

Im keeping the coasters base colour since it goes with the foliage and sort of disguises it within it. Il try the duller red for the supports but the brightness of it goes with the red flowers scattered around the place. I am going to extend the cages, i had it like this so guests could get a better view of the riders whilst they are on the ride.

Thanks for the comments and the support so far.

Hobbes hit the nail on the head. What's the use of a mid-air fence to keep things in or out? They'll just go under.

Other than that glaring ridiculousness, it looks good.

Update

I know it hasnt been long since the last update but i have got a lot done over the past couple of days.
This is the Discovery Centre where guests can go inside and learn about the whole dinosaur era. (This building was originally meant to be the station to an adventure ride nut after much thought i decided to change it)



What do you guys think?

P.S I have also extended those fences so they now are level with the ground and added posts.

Edited by Loopy, 19 January 2006 - 12:48 PM.

I like it a lot. The landscape is real nice and the trees are perfect. The buildings are nice too.

I think that path in the lower right with the wooden supports deserves better...

The rest looks excellent.

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