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UPDATE



This is my take on the marvel area of IOA. Its called Marvel City and it will feature one of the parks main rides (it is NOT a rollercoaster). Im thinknig about having roads instead of the regular path to give it a more city look. There are ALOT of details missing in this screen, this is just to give an outline to what the area will look like.

Thanks

Don't make it roads...

Things I like -
- Abstract statue with tree in it. Excellent.
- Nice blue windows.
- Mix of colours actually works pretty well.
- Can't fault your landscaping or foliage work, truly magnificent. It gives me shivers to see it done so well.

Things I don't like -
- Roof of yellow building. Lose the abstract thing.
- That's pretty much it, actually.

I love how much foliage you've managed to get in there without losing the "city" look. I can't wait for this.

i like that last screen.
looks more like a park now.
the water is out of place though. use trees to seperate areas.

i like that last screen.
looks more like a park now.
the water is out of place though. use trees to seperate areas.

It's islands of adventure so i think the water fits very well.

You know what loopy this is amazing work, i love it so much. I am a big fan of islands of adventure and imo you are doing a perfect job atm. keep this level of quality up and this should earn a spotlight.

wow, its amazing. cant wait for jurassic park and toon lagoon if you do them

Uh...

uh... wow.

Just beautiful.

-ACE

And you were the "weakest" guy on my old H2H3 team of:

Coaster Ed
Corkscrewed
Phatage
Blitz
DJ
P_BOB
HevyDevy
Areoglobe
and Me

That brake up was pure Tooning!!!

My only advice is to FINISH IT, I know you can, you have built so much you could have 3 parks done alreddy, just they are on like 14 total maps

Its a throwback, but it does look good.

8/10

Im planning jurrasic park as we speak! Thanks for the comments so far. This break has done wonders for my parkmaking i feel so inspired this park is defientaly getting finished. I have removed that abstract thing on the roof it did look out of place there.

I don't really like the marvel areas of IOA parks. I just never see one that looks really good. I just don't think they look very good in RCT2 or RCT1. But I give credit to people for trying to make them because they are rather difficult.

looks very well loppy. it looks like you put much time into the screne. well done with you work.

very nice last screen dude!
it is very different from other ll parks which is very positive for me

man this is awsome!

i like the city feeling... also witout the roadpath.
nice use of the zeor clearness... the green uilding on the top side looks great. althougt i'm not huge fan of the flat\city walltype the is in RCT like the right building...

Update

This is a screen of what the Jurrassic Park area will look like. there will be NO more screens of other areas from now on, only of the ones i have shown already. (Marvel and Port Of Entry)



Its a little unfinished but you get the general idea.

I think color wise as well as the simplistic stylings might be a bit too much like JS's Jurassic park in IOAH.

I would simply recommend a change in the coaster's color though as the rest is definently befitting of the theme.

ride6

Holy Fuck this is a JS rip-off If I ever did see one.

i wouldn't say so.
and i'd leave the rocks as they are now.

Ok.

Last Screen (Marvel City)
You can do better here. What you have is good, but I think that you need to take the approach that X-Sector and VTD took when they were making there IOA. If you have seen it, you would know its very colorful and flashy, and looks really urban, and it was TRULY groundbreaking during the times (first good usage of coaster track/stations as architecture). I think where this area ultimately fails in some sense is the abundance of vegetation. It gives me the sense that the city is abandoned, when it really is not suppose to be. Use the abstract coaster stations, the river rapids roofing style, and all the tools that LL gives you to your advantage here. You could also throw in some martian theming objects if you use them wisely. The actualy buildings themselves are really nice however, especially the big one with the queue going through it.

Jurrasic park
Like Scheussler failed in my mind, you are doing the EXACT same thing. First off, if you want to make Jurrasic park feel natural, thats fine. I don't have an issue with that. But if you want to do this, you need to make it look a BIT more "jungly" and less bare. The movie did not take place on a bare rocky island. It took place in a jungle. You could also throw in labs, the electric fences, etc. One thing you could do, is have the actual area rest on a mountain overlooking a dense jungle pit surrounded by fences...another thing you could do is have the visitor center/lab areas as one "mini" area, and then have the path going into the electric fences and such, thus entering jurrasic park. Just some ideas. But first and foremost, you must make Jurrasic park look wild and exotic, like something you have never seen before. This, I have seen before.

After looking back and comparing mine and JS's areas, it does look very similar. i did not do this intentionally it just happened to be very very similar. I have changed it now anyway, there is alot more foliage and a more jungly atmosphere to it now. I will reshow this screen soon when im finished with it

For one thing use yellow flowers and that "crazy" brown/tan path, then you have a better JP look and no JS look.

Like Scheussler failed in my mind

Blasphemy I tell ye!