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I ask for tips if u can read .. omfg .. hard?

So my tip for you is:
After such a long drop please make a longer part where the boat can slow down.
It,s also more realistic if you put the station to the ground, so the guests don't have to climb that hill up and down.

Edited by egg_head, 06 December 2005 - 02:00 PM.

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I know its ugly but im just bad at these things.. (Mountains + Plants + Theming.)

Can u please give me Tips?

Hmm, i don't like the path it's messy with the entrance path. No I don't like this screen.

Well I like that you're trying things. I noticed that the textures and colors on the station building there are different than on the other buildings and I also was happy to see a hill in there. Never the less it would help if you put in 2-3 textures and carefully worked them into something that at least creates the illusion of a natural hill. Aka, one worn down by wind * rain and with only a few bits of solid rock jabbing up into the sky.

Never the less I'm starting to sense some promiss that you may someday become of something.

ride6

theres little things that dont take talent to make the screen look better, all you have to do is look at the picture and see what you should do differantly. for example:
-make the station building one tile wider so the in-game enterance and exit isnt showing.
-where the flume leaves the station, put a wall on the inside tile so you cant see the bare land.
-on the 2x2 building in the middle of the screen, you have the short mexican fences going around the building but they stop in the middle. why have them stop? it makes the building look unfinished.
-do something with the queue line. right now there is none and because of that, the path that leads up isnt connected to the enterance/exit path.
-look at those paths that go up the hill. would you want to walk that high with no fences? that would be an awefully long fall. add fences.

its little things like those that doesnt take much skill but will make the screen look better and more complete.