(Archive) Advertising District / A screen

  • trav%s's Photo
    Just to prove there are actually some rides in the park.

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    Thanks to Postit for this.

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    And this is in the entrance area.
  • Metropole%s's Photo
    Hm, tis quite nice. The coaster has no support holding it up on that centre bit in the top screen. And I'd have a space between "g" and "force" perhaps. Nice sign though.

    Second screen is cool but the swinger is hidden too much by trees so it kinda takes away from it.

    Metro 8)
  • Phatage%s's Photo
    If that tower is the beginning of the queue line and leads it underground to the ride, then its cool cool cool. With the second screen, would be a lot better with a different path, many real parks have areas like that and just now trying to imagine them with a brown path is funny, and its not like your park has to be realistic or anything but from experience with real parks, the bright brown just feels too much. If you have the tiny pebble path, I think that would work better.
  • Ride6%s's Photo
    Too much path in that first screen IMO and I would recommend a change to either rock (like the cobblestone that the game comes with) or just grey tarmac for the 2nd.

    Maybe some flowers in the 2nd screen too...

    Otherwise it's looking to be very promissing in the general quality sense. Just be careful to not let it drift too far into "Turtle and slob immitation land". :)

    Ride6
  • penguinBOB%s's Photo
    The first screen is about 3 x's better than the second. So I guess work with the second area more, because you're on to something with the first. or something like that.

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