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i like it.

i would smooth out the landscape a bit in that last screen. i like your archy style tho and I like how you used the small rails to make what I interpretted as a "choose your seat" queue in the station.

What it was...




...What it is.

TREES!!! WE NEED TREES GUV!!

You know I actually think the path is the bane of the whole screen. I would deffinetly change it. Also, break up the large areas of pathing with small 1 or 2 square long patches of foliage, or a sheltered seating area (be quaint with this though).

The architecture isnt exactly bad, so props for that, but the pathing and color selection let you down beyond reason.

Oh and I've just spotted one of the 7 deadly sins of RCT-mastery, you have placed a path on either side of what is supposed to be a wall. *tut tut*

Oh and I've just spotted one of the 7 deadly sins of RCT-mastery, you have placed a path on either side of what is supposed to be a wall. *tut tut*

Since when? And what are the other six?

Very nice, trav. I like it.

TREES!!! WE NEED TREES GUV!!

Agreed. And some benches, litter bins, lamps and whatnot would do some good too. Nice start trav.

it appears lifeless imo.
It doesn't say WOW to me, it's just average. I hate the path. It probably seems dead due to the lack of life i.e. foliage!

Oh and I've just spotted one of the 7 deadly sins of RCT-mastery, you have placed a path on either side of what is supposed to be a wall. *tut tut*

Do you mean the glass wall in the upper right? I think it's supposed to be part of a door.

Anyways, it looks nice. Very likely the best work I've seen from you so far. Still has a good Verne-ish futuristic type theme to it. And the archy is pretty good. But you probably still could use a few more trees. I'd recommend at least just using zero-clearance and placing a few big ones on the path.

I Like Coaster and Supports look cool.
When Lights/Bins/Benches and stuff are added aswell as crowds of peeps the pathing might not stand out as much.

Not too sure on the supports and also the art and deco underneath them /window-doors. Also the lone tree is really annoying.

- good color scheme on the building
- still needs a few more trees and bushes
- might need something to break up the large black roof
- could use a brighter color on the cobra roll supports

Bleh.

Brilliant, the falls, the foliage, the buildings...
But for some reason i don´t really like the lamps and pots pole structure. Seems a bit out of place.
Good to see this, and you, is still alive.

Edited by Akasha, 09 April 2006 - 07:53 AM.

Is this the same file?

I don't like all of the Fisherman stuff littered along the path, and the architecture is a little too busy for me, but it's all good. Nice to see you are still around. By the way, why didn't you get a PT park in? Did you not finish or what?

Na I didn't finish it in time, I'm still working on it now, about 50% done and I can go back and improve things now theres no deadline.

Yes, bleh

You need to match rooves up, would look better. At the moment it all looks like a random mess

I'm with Richie on this one.

I must admit it is an impressive screen, but it is quite unharminous. Too many textures, rooves, etc., and the lattice windows are quite repeatitive. I'm also with Akasha on the lamps as well. Also, the waterfall has no source...

~Jazz~

Edited by Jazz, 09 April 2006 - 11:52 AM.

Nice screen trav. I have a few suggestions

I feel there's too much brown making it too "safe". The atmosphere is there, but more color might help it more and reduce the brown tones.

I do like the complexity of the buildings but I wish they had a little more identity.

Rides?

Otherwise, I'm lovin' it. Good to see you active around here again.

Nice to see you didnt finish the entry like you guarateed you would.