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Since it's my birthday today, I decided to post a screen.



Thanks to Iceman for the inspiration.

I`m just missing the planting.

way too much path. And yeah, you need some foliage in there.

I see what your tryin to do but it aint workin. Too much path and the same color. Its ok.

yes... too much path and i cant figure out what is the sense of this building. is there a ride inside or what? banners or something like that would be nice

The archy looks pretty solid here, thought I liked the looks of you Asian park better... there is way to much pathing. I am interested in finding out what is within the building.

It's just a motion simulator .

I like the glass awnings. Really nice touch.

The building is nice, although it looks so cold and lonely. Try to add more, such as foilage, benches, a bit of landscaping, etc. The whole environment is what makes the building I suppose.

Beach park theme? If so, I get why there's no foliage. I, personally, like it.

I love it. Refreshing colours and an unusual theme. Reminds me of a sort of Ballroom you'd find at the end of one of the old Beach Piers if they were slightly modernised.

happy birthday trav

Too much path, and to be more accurate, too much ugly ass path. Choose a path that looks decent then break it up with some folidge patches. The building itself looks okay in a tomarrowland sorta way and it shows great amounts of progress over what you were building only a month or two ago.

ride6

@Muuuh. Yea, The whole idea of this area was to not add foliage, but I might add some to see what it looks like.

@Tracid. The path will be broken up with some more buildings eventually, I just didn't want to give too much away in this screen.

@RMM. I like it and I don't really care if you don't to be perfectly honest, I build for myself, not for everyone else.

@Thirteen. Theres a Motion Simulator in there.

@inVersed. Thanks, like I said earlier, theres all that path because I didn't want to show too much yet.

@Geoff. Thanks . Although there will be some foliage and landscaping somewhere in this part of the park, it wont be here.

@Rhynos. Thanks, but I don't get what made you think of beach.

@Fisheye. Thanks . But the ballroom bit confuses me.

@Posix. Yay! Thanks .

@ride6. I like this path, I don't know why, but I like it. Yay, someone realises its futuristic theme! Thanks .

@Rhynos. Thanks, but I don't get what made you think of beach.

The amount of path and the fact that it's right next to the waterfront is for the main reason of my thinking.

Nice archy and great colors. Keep it up!
parkmaker

@Rhyno. Ahhhhhhh.

@Parkmaker. Thanks .


New screen.

I dont have too many complaints on this screen. I actually like it! Alot! The coloring gets a bit repetitive . But over all, great work.

besides the bright yellow and slime-like-green you did a great job!

i like it more than screen 1...

They're missing that certain something, the buildings. Like brown doesn't stand out against brown. No flare, just brown

I like this, trav. I like seeing how you have improved tons since past works of yours, yet you still seem to keep the same unique style of building, but the quality improves. I am not sure about the green but other than that, its a pretty nice screen man.