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Hello everyone.

I've started a new park, called Noble Falls. It's themed to the Graeco-Roman period, as you'll see.

Here is my corkscrewed-coaster, called Alexander's Epic, circled around by the midway:



Please comment, and enjoy!

~Jazz~

Glad to see that you're using custom supports this time. Wait. Do you mean Corkscrew coaster or a roller coaster by Corkscrewed?

^ A corkscrew roller coaster.

Pretty cool theming there. The coaster doesnt look too bad either. I just wish this didn't look like a million other parks out there.

It wood be better if there where some more suports.

Too bad that the coaster goes over the path on the right side, especially when you see no supports.

This might of course be a screen of an area with less landscaping in a park with a lot of large-scale land differences, but I can't tell. If it is not, however - if the rest of the park is like this - then I'd say you're straying too close to other people's work and what could be defined as the norm. Don't make yourself make a mostly flat park because other people do. The only reason why there are few parks with massive landscaping all throughout is that few people other than Mala have ever tried it. There's no rule that says it's wrong or anything.

I like the structure a lot. The one thing i am not crazy about is all the paths. Also the screen had a very nice orderly atmostphere to it, yet the coaster kinda ruins it for me for some reason

Like others have said, the turn over the path needs some support. Other than that, it's tough to see how the path will tie into other areas.

Its interesting. I like the themeing, but there is too much pathing. You also need a support in the pathing on that one turn in the bottem right.

I like it though..the building is cool, and the blue-ish white roman themeing is pretty.

Hey everyone.

After my computer being down for some time, I have an update.

The name of the park has now been changed to The Three Eras. [B] As the name says, there will be three areas, named as follows:

1. Alexandria (Roman)- 90%
2. Tangerine City (Oriental)- 30%
3. Unknown Area- 0%

Overall Completition: 40%[I]

This screen shows Tangerine City, [B] with its wooden coaster, The Legend.
Here you will see it's one vertical loop, wrapped around bu the midway and some builidngs:



Please comment, and enjoy. This will park will be in delay until after the PT2, since I have to work on my entry.


~Jazz~

I don't like it much.

I don't think the colours compliment each other, I don't like the idea of just one type of roof, and I've never been keen on a loop on a wooden coaster.

Also, you seem to always have a green area in your parks.

That screen reminds me of a park darkjanus made a long time ago. Greenwood Grove?.. or something. I like it.. it looks cool.

The purple flowers looks outta place... I am not a big fan of the white flowers either. The archy is good. The land itself seems pretty flat also..

Although I don't like it much, I think this shows enormous potential for what is to come from you Jazz. . This little plaza is nicely framed with the loop serving as a centerpiece. My issues with it are the color combinations. The green archy, red roofs and brown path just don't work for me. Combined with the orange/blue swinger, its really an eyesore!....but structurally, its really good. so keep it up Jazz. looking forward to your pt entry.

That looks awesome!

Change the colour of the swinger and you have cracked it.

Hey everyone, thanks for the comments.

trav: Not to nag on your post, but what you're saying it what look better with more than one different type of roof? If that were to be installed, the area would lose consistency. Also, what's wrong with a loop on a woodie every once in awhile? I wanted something different for a change; an element that would make a good centerpiece.

Jacko: Thanks!

Inversed: Thanks... I've never been good with garden colors.

Mantis: Thanks!

JKay: Thanks, and I have a very good idea cooked up for the PT2...

Born again rct-er: Thanks, I'll fix up them swinger colors.

Keep em' coming...

I like how that square of buildings surrounds the loop element - it's very bright, yet I find it interesting. Maybe change the colors of the coaster though...

trav: Not to nag on your post, but what you're saying it what look better with more than one different type of roof? If that were to be installed, the area would lose consistency. Also, what's wrong with a loop on a woodie every once in awhile? I wanted something different for a change; an element that would make a good centerpiece.

Just because it's got more than one roof doesn't mean that it wont be consistant, with just one roof, I feel that it could become repetitive. Now that I look at it again, the loop looks good.

I think I've noticed a mistake though, at the bottom right of the screen, the arches on the doorway are yellow instead of green, is it supposed to be like that?