(Archive) Advertising District / Apojii Islands

Albeit slight un-interesting theme-wise, this is pretty good. I think your themes could be more refined or obvious. I also think your building facades could use some improvement. Still not bad at all tho.

So, like, whenever someone tells you to shut up, something "happened" to them?  Did everyone used to NOT tell you to shut up when you said something stupid?

No no no...see, I was the one that got Richie into advertising parks. Here you go.

And Alpengeist, who fucking cares about the quality of my parks right now?!?!? All that matters was that I was able to give him my honest opinion on his screens (the first comment too).

Albeit slight un-interesting theme-wise, this is pretty good.  I think your themes could be more refined or obvious.  I also think your building facades could use some improvement.  Still not bad at all tho.

Thanks Jkay, I will do that in my newest section, its a medieval theme. And I will also improve on making my themes more refined.

Thats correct, I just used those entrances. Whats wrong with using a custom entrance? We all use custom scenery so why not an entrance?

@Inversed again: I will try to get those types of foilage in. I am kind of a beginner at foilage.

@DragonInferno: Can you give me some tips to let me know how to detail my buildings?

Well I don't really know, about the detailing thing. But one suggestion I'd make is changing up the colors a little bit. I'm not particularly saying put horribly bright colors everywhere, I'm just saying vary up the colors some so they still fit within the theme, the majority of window and door colors seem to be brown.

Those of you who are nitpicking at stupid details really need to stop.

Two new pictures I have to show you guys:





The first one is some theming on the wodden rollercoaster "Wolfbane". I tried to add a waterfall (my first attempt) and I think it turned out good. Hope you like that screen.

The second one is of "Phantom of the Woods" flying coaster. I changed the colours and I tried to change the foilage but I don't think I improved much there. Still, enjoy that screen too.

Wolfbane looks good with the waterfall and all. However, Id recommend you do something with the foliage underneath the supports because when you place the foliage there it got rid of the bottom half of a lot of the coasters support making it look like the coasters floating above ground (very unrealistic). Besides that it looks good. Phantom of the Forest still looks good to me. I really dislike the colors and the path you chose there. Are you building this park with 1x1 paths or just in that area? I like it though in those screens, for the most part

The coaster designs are the plus here. I'd keep working on your theming tho, keeping in mind how important landscaping, foliage and colors are. The foliage in the first screen particularly needs some work. Landtypes are also iffy here. I'd try to make the landscape have less dramatic texture changes...i.e no abrupt changes from desert sand to grass as you have in the second screen. Keep it up tho, you're going in the right direction

It looks nice, I think. Great improvement on work I've seen long time ago (RCT Compo Community Park).

I'd say for the foliage in the first screen that you start next to the waterfall and work your way outward from there, to make it look like it becomes denser around the falls. I would change the sand tiles on the right of the waterfall to brown dirt or dirt/grass combo and I would do the same with the lower of the two rock tiles on the left of the falls, so that you can put foliage there and it doesn't look unbalanced.

looking nice man...i like the first screen,...but you could probly change the color of the coaster in the 2nd screen...thats a pretty ugly color for a coaster...but then again, i dont kno what color you would change it to...so...nvm...

but anyways, keep it up

@Inversed: Those 1x1 paths you are talking about is the queue line for the Phantom of the Woods. I'll get rid of the foilage under the supports (Did that by accident). I have also changed the colour of Phantom of the Woods, I will post a screen of it later.

@JKay: I'll fix the textures, maybe get rid of the sand im using completely and use the darker sand. Also, thanks for the comments about the coaster.

@Michael: Yeah, my section in the community park wasn't that good, but now that I have improved as you mentioned...

@Panic: I will make the foilage denser around the falls and change the textures as you said.

Thanks for the comments everyone!