(Archive) Advertising District / Haunted Shores
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25-July 05
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Jazz Offline
The landscaping looks really unnatural. It looks like raised squares of land. Clean it up a bit. The main problem seems to be the lack of organization, not to mention this really doesn't show anything to be commented on. I suggest completing more before showing your screen, because some of this material looks completely awkward. For example, there are sections in the water of extreme rapids and "shooting" water. Where does this come from? Or, at least an explaination. The coaster color scheme also blends in way too much with the castle, or whatever it is. Provide some contrast, everything is black. The foilage could also use some more naturality. Maybe some more trees? Plus, I don't like the custom bushes on a rocky surface, it doesn't look that good. You also need custom supports, especially on an inverted coaster. All of the large openings in this huge structure look odd, as well. Overall, it looks really messy and just doesn't seem to flow. I think you really need to put more time and effort before showcasing. -
Xcoaster Offline
I think it's a flying coaster. But I agree with most of what Jazz said.
Anyways, the Dracula theme makes sense, with the ship, the lighthouse, and the castle and such. Only problems with that theme though is that his castle was in the forest (Translyvania), and the the ship he took to England, the Demeter, ran aground at Whitby, since he couldn't pass over moving water.
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