(Archive) Place-To-Release-Your-Parks Land / The New Empire~download p.4

  • JDP%s's Photo
    well okay then, but yeah its a cool concept.(dark ride, water, general coaster)
  • FredD%s's Photo
    Finally!
    The New Empire is finished!

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    No download, because I've send it to the VP, so you have to wait for the download!
  • thirteen%s's Photo
    i hate it how the land "flows" into the water
    that looks goddamn blocky and destroys all the nice atmosphere created by the theming which looks very good

    that is.... argh i cant look at this screen
  • ekimmel%s's Photo
    yeah, I'm not sure I like how the shoreline is. If it were more like Venice I think it would be ok, but it's not.

    But good luck with the VP. It's good see people still trying to get VP.
  • Xcoaster%s's Photo
    I think you're guaranteed to get at least runner up. And from the screens, I think you'll have an excellent chance at VP. Good luck.
  • JDP%s's Photo
    well you cant blame him for the blocky shore line for the fact if he makes it longer it will look stupid with it streching closer to the island.

    good finish man...
  • FredD%s's Photo
    Thanks Xcoaster!
    I don't think that I can win it, but a runner-up is possible!
  • ekimmel%s's Photo

    well you cant blame him for the blocky shore line for the fact if he makes it longer it will look stupid with it streching closer to the island.


    It's a solo. He gets all the blame for anything that's wrong with the park. He also gets all the credit when it gets VP or runner-up.

    Personally, I would have moved that island to the right a little bit where there was more room to slope the land properly. But even without doing that he could have sloped the land properly everywhere else and then done something else with the narrow area like make it rocky or just make the water more shallow.
  • JDP%s's Photo
    ^ he might have not though of that. but by the time he did, it was probaly too late with out making it look close to the island.
  • FredD%s's Photo
    I didn't tought about that when I maked the bench.
    And I wanted to do it, but I didn't because I'm to lazy :p
  • FredD%s's Photo
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    The story after The New Empire...
    We’re going to the north of Germany, to the mouth of the Seraconus (a river). Here, we can find Beapthomus.
    This little village is the place of birth of emperor Friedrich I.
    We’re going back to 529...

    It’s 12 December and it’s freezing. The Germans, who tried to attack the Roman Empire, have lost the fight against the Romans at the Rhine. Their leader (Clovis) was killed and now they’re hiding for the incredible Roman army who’s searching for the German army.
    The German army stays with farmers so they can’t be find easy.
    But two weeks later, the farmers hear the noise of the Roman army, the German army wants to run away but it’s to late for that.
    The Romans have surrounded the village.

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    That night, the German army is killed together with the farmers...all?
    No, the centurion (an officer in the Roman army) Magnus helped one farmerfamily to escape, because that was family of him.
    That centurion, was a good friend of the emperor Ceasarius IV.
    The family could live in the palace of the emperor in Rome.
    And in that family, we’ll know Friedrich.
    He was 16 years old when this happened.
    Ceasarius IV gave him education and was training him for being emperor, because Friedrich was the apple of Ceasarius IV’s eye.

    4 years later, Ceasarius IV was killed by the citizens of Atuatica Tongrorum (Tongeren, a city in Belgium).
    There was a little revolution but Magnus has always protected Friedrich and his family.
    After 6 years, is the revolution ended, and the Roman army has killed all the rebels.
    Then, Friedrich became emperor of the Roman Empire.


    He was the first emperor who wasn’t born in Rome, our have Roman parents.
    Anyway, the people of Rome liked him.
    He added Scandinavia (Denmark, Norway, Sweden and Finland), the Baltic states (Estonia, Latvia and Lithuania), Eastern Europe and a big part of Russia to the Roman Empire.
    This gave him the nickname “Northie”.

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    In 548 he wanted to go to his place of birth, because it’s a long time ago he’s been there.
    The village, that the Romans named Beapthomus, was still a litlle village in the mountains.
    On the mouth of the Seraconus, the Romans have build a big fort, made from wood...

    So, Friedrich doesn’t liked the poverty in his village.
    Beapthomus needed better economy, so Friedrich made a masterplan.
    First off all, he made a revolutionary circus...with all functions in all .Fights of gladiators, our slaves aiganst wild animals, horce races and even seabattles could be watched in the circus, that he named
    “Ceasarius IV” to his friend-emperor who died in Belgica.

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    The people where happy with this circus, it was very revolutionary and also...Friedrich introduced a new buildingstyle and that’s the reason why Beapthomus became an important city in the Roman Empire.
    He also wanted to build a Forum Romanum for his city.
    The construction started in 597 but ne never saw the building...because he died in 599 when he was 86 years old.
    His body turned back to Rome where it’s buried in the temple of Jupiter.
    After his dead, Beapthomus was developping into one of the famoust, greatest cities in the Roman Empire.

    In 1231, emperor Magnus XXI build a palace for him in Beapthomus. The palace garden is world famous.
    In the mountains, where the farmers lived, is now a busy centre of homes of treaders and local citizens, which is build in style like the Mont Martre. Beapthomus becamed the centre of artists, and that’s all happened by emperor Friedrich I who changed history...

    Edited by FrEdD, 30 November 2005 - 06:46 AM.

  • ChillerHockey33%s's Photo
    Cool.

    The shadow on one of the suns in your logo is going the wrong way.

    -Ryan
  • FredD%s's Photo
    I'm not so good with photoshop ;)
  • Guest_LC_BlaZeR%s's Photo

    I'm not so good with photoshop ;)

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    Then keep practising. Annyway, i like your park verry much, i can't wait for the download

    Edited by _LC_BlaZeR, 05 December 2005 - 01:46 PM.

  • FredD%s's Photo
    Jij zou iets aan je Engels moeten doen...
    En alsof iemand die tekst over RCTM in je onderschrift begrijpt...domoor...
  • SenZ%s's Photo
    Warning: LC Blazer is a flamer who is also known as Lionsault or Colonel at RCT Miracles. He got banned from there because of threatening people and flaming at people. Now he has "Dit is een slechte site" in his sig, what means "This is a shitty site" (which it isn't anyways). I suggest to watch him, since he is very handy with PMing, in a bad way, since he thinks the PM at the bottom of a message stands for "Automatical Flame Button".


    Ontopic:

    Leuk verhaaltje FrEd :) Park mag er ook wezen ;)
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    Then keep practising. Annyway, i like your park verry much, i can't wait for the download

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    Behalve dat denk hij ook nog eens dat hij grappig is door van jouw naam "pislul" te maken.....triest....*sigh*

    Aside from that, he thinks he's being funny by changing your name into "pislul". Sad.....*sigh*

    Anyway, it's looking good! MUCH better than the work I've seen from you on RCTHolland. Your theming and architecture isn't as chaotic as it used to be. You didn't use a hundred different styles at a time this time, which automatically makes it looks so much better. Congratulations and let's hope you'll improve even further from here! :D


    Well, as you can see, another Dutchy here! =D Too bad I stink at the game IMO, so don't be expecting too much from this here Dutch guy. ^_^" Oh well, MAYBE, someday....

    Edited by MysteryGuy, 07 December 2005 - 11:18 AM.

  • Guest_LC_BlaZeR%s's Photo

    Jij zou iets aan je Engels moeten doen...
    En alsof iemand die tekst over RCTM in je onderschrift begrijpt...domoor...

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    Als jij iets aan je Nederlands doet ;)
  • RemyKO%s's Photo

    Warning: LC Blazer is a flamer who is also known as Lionsault or Colonel at RCT Miracles. He got banned from there because of threatening people and flaming at people. Now he has "Dit is een slechte site" in his sig, what means "This is a shitty site" (which it isn't anyways). I suggest to watch him, since he is very handy with PMing, in a bad way, since he thinks the PM at the bottom of a message stands for "Automatical Flame Button".
    Ontopic:

    Leuk verhaaltje FrEd :) Park mag er ook wezen ;)

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    Waarom nou weer COlonel ik heb toch geen ban op RCTM. Haal mij er niet altijd bij zeg.. :mad:
  • SenZ%s's Photo
    LC Blazer, hij spreekt beter Nederlands dan jou, klein kind. Als je op school gepest wordt kun je er altijd over praten, daarvoor staan wij altijd open. Dan moet je het niet gaan afreageren op andere mensen, niet op RCTM waar je daar al voor gebanned bent en ook niet hier op NEdesigns.

    Edited by Michael, 07 December 2005 - 12:13 PM.

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