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Hey

I'm new at NE.
I post at RCT.com and RCT Miracles (under the name of FrEdD) but now I'm think I'm good, enough for show my work at NE.
First, I'll say something about myself:

I'm Frederik Boelaert
14 years old, and I live in Gent (Belgium).
Play about 1,5 years RCT II....

This park is a caraiben park and the name is based on Paul Cless's song Suavemente


Revenge of the Kraken - n°1

This is side of Revenge Of The Kraken, a Free Faal about 84 M high....

Revenge of the Kraken-n°2

And this is the top of the attraction....but I've deleted it cause I get many bad reactions on it.

Revenge of the Kraken-n°3

And a overview of the attraction.


El Torre del Mare

And this is El Torre Del Mare, a swinger in the Spanish Zone.

Elektroshock

Elctroshock, a lil'B&M coaster in the Atlantis zone.

Atlantica

Atlantica, a bad hacked Super-Splash from Mack.
I've got some problems with my trainer and it's not good hacked so I made the track under water.
Theming is not finished yet and there have to come some plants and flowers....

Los Piratos De Trinidad

Also in the Spanish zone, Los Piratos De Trinidad, a sort of Splash Battle

El Camino Del Rey - GOT TO SEE THIS !!

El Camino Del Rey, a hacked coaster wich launch a Mine Train trough a Spanish ...ehm....ravine ??!!

The new parkentrance

And the new entrance (I had another one, but I found it realy bad, so I made a new one) themed to the USA !



The Tidal Wave, about the tidal wave that destroyed Atlantis....



50 years Swave-Mentes and this is the birthday gift... A B&M suspended in the (new) westernzone...



Texas Chainsaw, our chaotic....



Forta Granada, a darkride in the Spanish zone....
I've got some more screens of it, but I'm to lazy to shwo them

This is all, it's vacation now for me, but I dont have much free time, I've got to work to my entry for the RCT Miracles Champions Trophy Battle III.

please do not post uncompressed screens.

I don't like your custom supports from the B&M coaster.

honestly, I like it. It looks like one of the most realistic things I've ever seen.

I like it too. Buildings lack cool formation, but the detail on them is pretty good.

The third screen looks the best.

I much prefer the western screens to the others, if i'm honest. It looks like your landscaping could use some work, try experimenting with some more daring land formations.

Very nice work, though.

[QUOTE]honestly, I like it. It looks like one of the most realistic things I've ever seen. [QUOTE]


Thanks !! That's also my meaning for this park....


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What the F*ck do you mean with that ??


[QUOTE] I much prefer the western screens to the others, if i'm honest. It looks like your landscaping could use some work, try experimenting with some more daring land formations.
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I prefer the atlantis zone

It's true, my landscaping is not really good, that's why I not experiments with that....

Hello,
I'm looking at the one's you've used the IMG tag with...because I think you posted too many screens here. Why not post three now, wait a week, and post others? You'd build up more excitement that way, and you'd get more replies.
For the first screen, I think you need to add more detail. You've got the basis of the architecture all mapped out, but I think it's maybe time now to add balconies, ladders, pots, and other ornaments you can think of. It will make it more detailed, and complex which is what you should be aiming for in that situation. As for the second screen, it's an ok themed ride...generally, I prefer rides that are spread out a bit more and have a greater variety of vegetation there. I can see that you've overused those cacti, which is maybe something you should try to avoid. The third screen is the best of the lot, why not make the rest of your archy as good as that? The detail thing applies also for the last screen.
Generally, good stuff and I can see you are a potentially promising parkmaker. Good luck with the rest of the park.

Its Okay, the structures seem a little block and undetailed to me. I liked the forth from the last best, its really has a cooll layout though it is a bit blocky.

Good job, keep at it, for you are in the right direction

I think it certainly is a nice beginning for a park. Nice colors and forms in relatively big structures. (which as such I like)
I do miss dedicated details however to make it interesting.
When you tell it is 'Carribean' or 'Spanish', I'm sorry , but I don't feel or see that atmosphere or architecture in it And I regret it that I see quite some buildings/houses that are exactly the same as I've seen so many times in other parks from you on RCT Miracles and RCT.com.)
But still I think you do have potential to make beautiful parks


Try to vary your 2x2 buildings with other layouts, and make the bigger structures more interesting by adding walls that stick out and cute little details (and do some research before you call anything 'Spanish' or 'Caribbean")

and for the rest: please go on, and Happy building!

blank area with trees...


something....