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This is my first park and I am 90% done. So speak your mind about the screenshots.

am i missing something?

possibly.
maybe i'm missing it too.

no your not. I thought I uploaded the image but it didn't work. 1 should be up now.

looks ok, maybe change the flowers to some of the original ones.

hmmm... where to start at.

I think you should work on your archy... i notice a little bit there and its extremely blocky. Work on getting smally shaped detailed building instead of massive blocks

I think the 1x1 paths in some spots isnt good.. you're not roomie so you cant get away with that.

The coaster layouts are wild and unthought out

The name can you some tweaking as can the logo

Work on your foliage instead of having 4 types you use, use 1/4 scenery like bushes to make it look detailed

Change the color underthe path so it matchs the path (ie dirt under brown tarmac)

Instead of making the land all flat I would advise that you raise tiles to make hills and such to add a realitic feel to it

I noticed a lot of the coasters 'float' above the land which is extremely unrealistic. I see a total of about 5 supports, including the custom.

Keep trying, I'm sure youll improve because its your first park!

thanks for all the advice so far. This is my first actual park but I entered a PT entry which was what I see is my best "park" yet. Back on topic, I might improve it but the park itself is finished (more like was finished). I am just working on the story line. I'll probably post the park itself later today. The park is almost peep friendly. Like, you can get people into the park but they get lost in some places. BTW here's another screenshot.

Shot's too zoomed out to say anything helpful. It does look pretty realistic though.

Advice on presentation though, don't put up screens that have a "ride is broken down" message. Makes your park look bad.

Does the height of the path change in ur park? at all? i dont mean to get to entrance/exits.. in you next park try to have some height variataion, this looks ok but its very flat.

this might sound lame but how do you upload your parks if their size is too big? (bytes) I can't use rctd, chapel's won't work for me and image shack only does images (duh) so what do I do?

try rapidshare

You have alot of "vertical-ness" there... I like the supports you've made,

Honestly, this looks pretty "run of the mill" to me, but its not bad for your first release. I agree with richie's comment about the landscaping (or lack thereof). I also think most of inversed's comments apply, mainly pointing out the lack of attention to detail. Not bad tho. Good luck with your PT entry.

this might sound lame but how do you upload your parks if their size is too big? (bytes) I can't use rctd,  chapel's won't work for me and image shack only does images (duh) so what do I do?

First off, did you send it to a .zip file.. that will greatly reduce the size if you haven't already.

I hate you inversed.

"You're not roomie so you can't get away with 1x1 pathing"

Who said you have to be roomraider to do anything?

I have an idea, lets tear the park apart in one post, when you cant even make anything decent!

Sorry, I'm pissed off.

You may say anything you want about me and this game, I suck at it, and won't take offense. He can do whatever the hell he wants, and I happen to like making coasters like that from time to time...I think everyone does.

I apologize if I offended you GigaForce. All I meant to say in that Roomie comment was that Roomie is like the only parkmaker I have seen pull off the 1x1 paths.

I was in no way dissing this guys park, in my original post here, I was just trying to cover all the things that could use some work or tweaking to make him a better parkmaker, not tearing his park apart in one post.

I do not want to ruin thread by arguements and stuff. I apologize just20706 for creating a disturbance

Dude don't worry about it, im in a shitty mood thats all.

Criticize all you want, i know its helpful to me, so it should help him as well.

All I meant to say in that Roomie comment was that Roomie is like the only parkmaker I have seen pull off the 1x1 paths.

Mala.

Yea he did the damn thang in Mountain Beach.

whoa, sweet metablocks.