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Second screen is wonderful. Nothing else I can say.

First screen would be better if the stairs were changed to the darker brown.

I really like the centerpiece you have going down towards the bottom of the screen, and most of your foliage use is good. The architecture looks pretty good except I think that the "Ristorante" building looks pretty ugly. The one right to the left of it is an improvement in my opinion.

Hi Turtle...

this screen rocks... kicks ass and it make my heart beats faster

i like it...
sorry for saing it but it reminds me of Six Frags work... this was the fist tuoght by seeing that screen.. but when i see the screen again. it feels like the old turtle. but still there are some things that I´d cut out:

- The hill with the red flowers.. it looks to bad. same about the jumping fountains.
- the non fenced gardens.. plz put a fence between the path and the gardens.

but beside that it looks great. the brown has a great contrast with the lighter buildings in the back... and front.

-PBJ

As you said in my treat: Brown is a great color to wrk with and yes you prove it is...

The reason that is has been used so much is because it can look so good.

PS. the waterfall in the back looks great...

Looks fantastic. The atmosphere is very good, the architecture is not stunning but yet very interesting to look at. The structure of the restaurant really catches my eye, the way the tables are placed on top of the roof looks so good. The foilage is excellent especially those red flowers do justness to the area. You obviously planned everything out into great detail

The only thing that might be worth revising is that the main building in the center lacks windows on the side. But that's the only thing that bothers me a little.

you're getting sooo much better, turtle.

on this screen, one suggestion i have is that maybe you should take out that pathing right in front of the covered single-wide pathing on the left. i think some bare land, maybe with some flowers and vegetation would look good and get rid of a little bit of the pathing you have in the section.

tell me if that makes sense.

That makes perfect sense, and would indeed get rid of a bit of the pathing. It does look better, thankyou very much. Could you catch me on AIM sometime if possible?

This looks absoloutely fantastic. It's different and eclectic, yet sophisticated and lovely.

I love it. It's almost sort of vintage in my eyes. Great work.

I'm not finding anything I dislike with this park so far (judging from screens) - I look forward to it's release...

Two things I would do different:

Change the small tree in the corner of the buildings to a birch (so it's taller) or change it to a big bush. For some reason that specific one doesn't work with me there .

The egyptian walls kind of look out of place. Maybe try continuing that fence you have going around the sides on the balconies.

What's the percentages for the areas? How far along are you with this, you think?

First screen is superb.

Turtle, you're my favorite RCT2 Parkmaker. That first screen is just NUTS.

Second screens isn't as strong as the first one, but still good job. I'd give it a 8 or 9/10.

Two things I would do different:

Change the small tree in the corner of the buildings to a birch (so it's taller) or change it to a big bush.  For some reason that specific one doesn't work with me there  .

The egyptian walls kind of look out of place.  Maybe try continuing that fence you have going around the sides on the balconies.

What's the percentages for the areas?  How far along are you with this, you think?

I see what you mean about the tree. I'm going to change it, not sure what to yet though.

Now that I look, the egyptian wall is out of place, too. Good call. I'll either replace it with something else, or add more to that building in other places.

Thankyou everyone for the kind comments and the suggestions. There are four areas, and i'm a lot further on than you may think. The next area shown will be Neuchâtel, a Swiss town. Look for a screen soon.

Second screen is looking pretty sweet Turtle. Not sure about the rock walls though.

Neuchâtel



This is a screen of the small courtyard before the entrance to the wooden rollercoaster that resides in this area, Schöri's Flight. The buildings you can see house two restaurants. There may be a picture of the coaster in the next update.

Comments are welcome, please leave your thoughts.

very nice!!

You only forgot to place a part of the roof of the balconie. Left side of the screen. I really like the blue flowers

Turtle, it's absolutely perfect. I don't know what I can say.

The tables area is absolutely perfect. The blue flowers look perfect. The red fits so well. I have nothing to complain about.

Wonderful, wonderful.

Everything is placed just right. The architecture, and foilage are phenomenal.

You only forgot to place a part of the roof of the balconie. Left side of the screen.

I'm having difficulty seeing this - it looks like it's all covered to me.

Looks lovely. Lovely is the word.

I really like this screen, the little courtyard atmosphere is very hard to pull off without being too busy or cramped in. I think you should only have one smoke thing coming out of each chimney; it would help with the calmness of the atmosphere. I really like the window placement and choices, they work very well. With the tables, I would suggest if you have invisible path to use that instead like Toon did in pheonix, but I love how there's a clearing in the taller foliage from the eating area so that the lake is visible, that right there shows that you're thinking from a peep's pov. With the brick part of the building in the top of the screen, I would reccommend that you don't use those decorative fences at the end of the roofs because it would block the water that slanted rooves are designed to let go down when it rains, but the ones on the sides of the roofs look nice and should stay. On the wood part to the left, with the quartertile rooves, you're missing one of those decorative quarter fence thingies, but personally I would like it better if you didn't use those there at all. The only other thing is that the fences on the scrambled eggs ride don't really fit with the screen, but since we can't see that area they could fit in there. Anyway, its great to see that you're being more meticulous (sp?) on the subtle details and I hope you did something special with the woodie.