(Archive) Advertising District / Project 1

That is a fantastic screen, i like the way you have used the quarter-high poles for lamps. The coaster looks great, foilage is great, everything is just so freakin' great. Nice toilets too, its nice to see creativity, and originality in some screens for a change. You seem to be the 'trend-setter' for most parkmakers out there, I'll expect everyone to be adding toilets to their roofs now...

-X-

Bringing the screen on over.

Personally I find that I'm ODing on flowers. There are WAY too many or they're too bold. If you dropped it to the darker red or cut the number down a bit it would be much better imo. The details and such really set this apart from the rather awful copy-cat work that's being done in this style. Love the lamps and the open air station, I can even imagine myself standing on it.

ride6

That's hott. Definately one of the best screens of the year, if not the best. Any more screens comin soon?

ride6 - if the flowers were made darker they'd clash with the coaster (clash as in too much of the same colour in the wrong places).

Okay man, you've really got something going here. Pay attention to peoples comments, there has been some very good advice posted so far.

I like the setting of the coaster more than the architecture personally. I like your buildings there but that's a very nice screen of the coaster. I want to see the rest of it.

Thanks guys, now to address some replies.

Jon - I'm pretty sure the coaster colours are staying, I like them.

deanosrs - What glitch before the first brakes? I can't see any... The stairs do look quite wobbly, i'll admit, but there's no diagonal fence, which would make things better.

cg? - Thankyou, I think.

artist - What's wrong with advertising? I just thought that i'd drum up a little interest in this park, not like it's a big secret or anything. We're all playing the same game, anyway.

JKay - The brick arches i'll look at, they do look a bit flimsy.

Leighx - It's not a bad screen, but I don't want to show the good parts, do I?

penguinBOB - Good idea with the supports, I'll see how that looks. Thanks.

Kumba - Ta.

Titan - Now a few more people know about it, that's good, isn't it?

shameless - I'll play around with the stairs, although I quite like them. Could be better though, I admit. Yes, they are bathrooms. Why not?

PBJ - Not really a new idea, but I haven't seen it done to this level in RCT2 yet. Just wait and see...

MudBlood - Yes, they are small poles, meant to represent lamps.

Geoff - Thanks.

spiderman - Yes, many of the LL parks of the past have used them. Hopefully you'll like the architecture more when you see more of it, it's not all like this.

metalface - Change your name back. Other than that, thanks.

Coaster Ed - I didn't have the time in H2H i'm afraid, and I was concentrating on finals parks. Fat lot of good that did lol...

Inversed - Thankyou.

Blitz - Is the willpower comment directed at me? Could you explain it if it is please? I'll have a play with the brick roof, I don't want it to become too crowded though...

X250 - Thankyou! I think you'll like this park, it has a lot of little new things in it.

ride6 - What's wrong with flowers lol? Seriously though, I think they look ok, so they'll probably all be staying, and staying that colour. I'm glad you can imagine yourself in this screen, that's what I love about great parks.

iBrent - Thankyou. There will be a new screen soonish, depending on when I feel like posting it.

mantis - Yes, thankyou.

sacf - I try to listen to all comments, I think it's important to be able to take criticism. Talk to me on AIM sometime if you'd like to see more, i'd be happy to show you.

Thankyou for all the comments guys, they're much appreciated. More welcome.

They're just a bit overpowering, that's all.

Btw I love the stalls as sceanery you've got there.

ride6

You see the white poles with the brakes over the top, on the rocky land? Just above them is a spanish arch, to the right of a door with a green lining on. Inside this arch it looks like a glitch. It may not be though.

You mean the white thing? I thought that was another train..

Wow, this is awesome Turtle, but i'm not feeling those bathroom rooves...

I thought that was another train..

...and you were right

My bad. can't see how there's 4 trains then!

That would be a spare train, on another track. It's a bit confusing from this angle, sorry...

That screen looks very pleasent. One of the better screens I've seen recently.

lovely screen Turtle, but the "toilet roof" building looks stupid, sorry

The foliage rocks, I love the spots of grass around the coaster.,

Marshy

Here's the second and final screen of the entrance area. This shows a bit of the area before the main park entrance. The park entrance building can be seen in the bottom right of the screen.



Look for a screen of the next area soon.

The only thing i'm not really sure about is that tree in the corner, fenced in by the buildings on either side. It looks like it would be causing the buildings structural damage, growing there.

Looks lovely, though. Good job.

hey turtle!
well, the first screen looks so fucking impressive! very realistic and a very great atmosphere.
absolutely amazing!

but the 2nd isn`t so good as the other. i don`t like the rocks-wall under the wooden-wall on the "del marco ristorante" house.

muuuh

[font="arial"]You already have my opinions on this, Jem. But yeah, it is amazing, i would love to grab a bite to eat there.[/font]

Urgh, you only ever use brown Turtle...

Looks beautiful, as expected. Not sure about the rock walls at the base of that building though.

Metro

It looks great. I really like everything in this screen. The only thing I'm not sure about is the fountain at the top, it just looks strange from where the screen is taken. But however I cant really comment on it, since not enough of it is shown. Still amazing screen nonetheless.