(Archive) Advertising District / Project 1

  • Turtle%s's Photo
    This doesn't have a name yet. I've been building it more or less since I finished Bijou, after a month break.

    The aim of this project has changed so many times that there really is none. I just like it. The park is 125x125, and is coming along well. I'm going to show one or two screens from each area.

    This is a screen that the more attentive of you will have seen if you clicked on my sig. Look for another screen of this area (the entrance) in a few days.

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    Any comments will help me improve, and are greeted gladly.
  • jon%s's Photo
    How very pretty. The architecture is pure turtle goodness but I think you should change the colour of the coaster, I don't know which colour to suggest.

    Looks sweet though.
  • deanosrs%s's Photo
    I hadn't seen this before. I took a long time looking at it, and overall I think I like it. It's different enough from BM, but not too different - very turtle. There's a few things I'd change - the glitch before the first brakes, the stairs look a little "wobbly" and I'm not keen on the string fence/split wood combo, but other than that it's looking quite impressive.
  • cg?%s's Photo
    Aside from my usual pet-peeves that only I seem to care about (custom scenery, custom supports, custom, uh, everything, really), it's a good representation of what I love to see in a "traditional" park. It's nowhere near ideal, however, your work is far closer to it than any other new parkmaker working in this style.
  • artist%s's Photo
    [font="arial"]This is probably the most stupid thing you could have done turtle, why advertise it? you know what i think of this park. wish you didn't advertise it though.[/font]
  • JKay%s's Photo
    LOL jem. Looks like you broke down and decided to advertise this after our conversation yesterday. I'm glad you did actually, because its a beautiful park and really represents something new and fresh from you. I've been lucky enough to see this park in its current state and its quite amazing. You definitely chose a good screen to start out with. I especially love the attention to detail, such as the stairway, pots with flowers, lanterns on the ride exit path. My only complaint are the brick arches towards the top of the station building; they create too much "hollowness"

    *edit - Why are you guys all on his ass about advertising? Its his park, let him to what he wants with it.
  • Leighx%s's Photo
    To be honest that is the worst screen to show.
    I still like it but could of choose beter. ;)

    And why did you have to advertise.
  • penguinBOB%s's Photo
    Yeah, you really don't need to/shoudn't advertise something of this quality. It's practically perfect. The only thing that I would change is the little rings on the supports, make them a different color, probably grey or something.
  • Kumba%s's Photo
    How about advertising to give lots more people a screen to enjoy?

    Im happy to see this park posted here Turtle and that screen is very nice. :)
  • deanosrs%s's Photo
    No-ones having this "no-advert" whinge in fatha's topic...
  • Titan%s's Photo
    ^ Maybe because this is alot of people's favorite park that not many people know about... ;)
  • shameless%s's Photo
    very pretty, i actually like the color of the coaster. my only complaint is the stairs, they dont fit in right.

    p.s. are those two bathrooms on top of that small building?
  • PBJ%s's Photo

    p.s. are those two bathrooms on top of that small building?

    yes they are!

    and i think that is a very new thing for turtle to do. using stall´s as roofs.

    It looks great turtle. i´m a great fan of your work and this is a very nice piece of work!

    only one thing... what for objects are that on top of the poles. those Yellow ´´lamps´´?
  • MudBlood%s's Photo
    the yellow things are 1/4 poles I think...

    Looks great!!!
  • Geoff%s's Photo
    Yea, it's so lovely.
  • spiderman%s's Photo
    I love everything except the architecture. It looks really bland and an awful lot like other parks around now. The scenery, path interaction, and coaster are all very high quality and show a lot of older styles.

    and i think that is a very new thing for turtle to do. using stall´s as roofs.


    I remember quite a few people doing that in the past in RCT1...
  • sloB%s's Photo
    looks more refined and nuonced than most rct2 work these days. very promising.

    i like the colors a lot but the coaster defnitely needs more supporting.

    either way, keep building; ne needs more dedicated parkmakers like you.
  • Coaster Ed%s's Photo
    Wow Turtle. This is why I voted you 'most disappointing' for H2H3. How come you didn't make anything like this then? It's practically a guaranteed win!
  • inVersed%s's Photo
    Great stuff Turtle I love your work.
    This is why u are one of my fav. parkmakers!
    Great work.
  • Blitz%s's Photo
    heh... ya need more will power ;)

    keep the coaster red, it's very striking.

    The only thing out of place is the brick roof thing... feels too light, needs more lip.

    Hee Hee

    edit: I see what you did there! 8@

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