(Archive) Place-To-Release-Your-Parks Land / MiddleAges

I finished my first LL-Park.

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Download:

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I hope you like it!

looks nice

Based on the screens, you have some pretty nice stuff in the park. My impression, though, is that there is a slight over abundance of pathway covering the ground. Try to break it all up a bit with gardens or small patches of small trees. Don't be afraid to add shrubberies and such. Something else that caught my eye was that you have a few areas where the walls are too 2-dimensional and flat. Break those up a little (just a little...too much might lead to overkill) with some structures or overhangs. Otherwise, your stuff is pretty refreshing to look at. NE needs more people like you to come around and add new variety.

I really liked the approach to structuring the park - natural landscape, actual castle-style buildings (not smaller imitations). You could have done with naming the woodie (and even most of the scenery etc...it just looks better) and also the park could have been named (ie the bench). Also, some music wouldn't go amiss. But good job - very nice for a first park!

you might want to name all theming rides next time.
overall, it seemed a little random and non-relaxing. something i'm not really fond of.
i'd say try to give the things you build more focus and more "etablissement". that way i think it's easier for the viewers to look at what is in the park and explore it. the way you have it with this park everything seems to be over the place.
but like mantis said, really not bad for a firstie.
looking forward to what you're going to do next

Say, this looks quite interesting. I haven't seen castle structures like that in awhile. I never liked the castle theme much, but I like the look of this for some reason. Maybe it's just nostalgia. Anyway, it looks very nice. Keep up the good work.