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It's very... um... random...

Those rocks in the pool look like giant squashed frogs - get rid of 'em.
The grey stone wall against that peach looks ghastly.
What the hell is that sand-like stuff on the ground?
And what's with the bushes on the roof of the building under the lift hill?

Overall though... I definetly like your coaster. Nice design.

I've done something I think you gonna like!!
I've changed those paths (it was to much) and I've changed the two building from the last update !!


hope you like this one!

hmmmm... nobody is answering!

well... here's a new update!!
this is rainbow boulevard (but the name can change) and the entrance of the monorail!



hope you like it!!

[font="Optima"]I can tell from the name, Rainbow Boulevard that this area is supposed to be colourful. But, you've pulled of colourful in the wrong way. Some colour clashes work and some dont, and you have some clashes that do not work aesthetically.

Another thing bugging me about the screen is the architecture, it all seems too symmetrical. Apart from the station itself, all you've got is 2x3 and 2x2 buildings which isn't good. Also there are other textures in the game other than the Toon's Spanish walls. Use them. It makes your buildings seem more interesting.

A thing that I do like about the screen is the white thing that the monorail runs on. It's a nice touch.[/font]

I really like that station building, but that massive white shit that the monorail sits on doesn't really look good.

well... I deleted that white thing under the monorail and replaced it with custom supports but I don't gonna update it!

BTW: thanks!

all suggestions are welcome!!

Don't expect to get very much positive comments here... over looks nice, do what you want.

That is because we have discovered the best type of criticsm that makes even the Noobiest Noob into the best parkmaker. Cold, Blunt Criticsm. It works...

what do you mean? that I'm much better then in the beginning?

He means that if you listen to the comments not necisarily following all of them, after all its your park, but just listening to them all you will find out what is good and what isnt.

X250 is a perfect example of this.

That is because we have discovered the best type of criticsm that makes even the Noobiest Noob into the best parkmaker. Cold, Blunt Criticsm. It works...

"We?"

Kids these days...

Simplify the architecture and make it smaller and thats a good start.

I really like this. I absolutely love it. Get rid of the hotels and change the paths. Use the paths that game with the game or some custom variation of them. Get rid of the ivy on the big building. The entrance is absolutely awesome, and your buildings have a really nice feel to them. I like it because you're trying to be realistic. It looks a lot more like a theme park to me than alot of the other things you see posted on this site.

Don't let these other guys discourage you, they are like vultures hungry for prey. They meticulously review people's screens, and believe it or not, they have been giving you very helpful advice.

I like it.

Realism pwns.

I liked the white "shit" underneath the monorail... it was kind of original and realistic.

Just keep playing around in the game, and be self-critical - don't be afraid to delete stuff and try it again, just without the things that made you delete it in the first place.

Also, the amount of screens you're showing is far too many. As it is, you may as well have released the park in its current state. Try to hold back the vast majority of the park for release.

thanks for your advice!! I will think on it!

WOW!

I like your park alot!
It's very nice, but your hotel is one of the best I've seen.
That indoor mouse coaster has some nice details on that roof!

Keep it up!

WOW!

I like your park alot!
It's very nice, but your hotel is one of the best I've seen.
That indoor mouse coaster has some nice details on that roof!

You have got to be kidding about the hotel.. you can't be serious.

40% of the new theme is finished so I show the finished area of it!
also 80% of rainbow boulevard is finished but I don't gonna show a screen of that because it's the same style like the last part of screens!

here we go!
the compact B&M floorless!


and a few of the themed building (more are coming)


Hope you like it!

Looks like an interesting layout, props for that. Architecture looks decent, however a little dull in places and too bright in others. Try to get a consistant colour scheme running through the area, usually works better than scattered colours. Nice job overall, i like these realism based parks.

-X-

The coaster lay out looks nice but i don't like the custom supports of the lifthill ,the station is a bit blocky i think but overall good work

great coaster, i like the layout and the colors.