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Hi...
I'm building a park called 'Paradise of Gold'
It's one of my first parks!

here are some screens!
1: my entrance


the group sales building!


the bungalow park!


the hotel!


the swimming pool and tennis field!


the 'food corner'


the 'Grill's paradise'!


the entrance to the hotel from the park side!


an overview of the entrance and hotel area!


and finally my first ride in the park! an indoor! (details still must be added)






so that was it! hope you like it!

Hello.


B- for effort.

F for the paths.
They almost made me projectile vomit all over myself. i suggest changing them to almost anything but what they are.


Raven-SDI
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The paths are quit horrible. They are the same hue as most of the rooves, so everything just looks drab. If you change the paths, the screens would greatly improve.

no other comments?

hmm. it's kinda not bad.
then again, it's kinda not good either.
your choice, lol.

yeah but the most details will come later! on my last park was it just the same!

don't worry about those other freaks! Your park is fine to me.

Those other guys need to get a life

hey bud, were the fingers really necessary?


But seriously, change those fucking paths. They're some of the worst you can get.

actually I like them
but I'll see what I can do with them so you'll have to wait!

but for the wait time i have some new updates!

screens!!!
recolored the mouse coaster


and added an info building, souvenirshop and ... carousel!


I know you're very critical (most of you I think) but I do my best to make a good park!

don't worry about those other freaks! Your park is fine to me.

Those other guys need to get a life     

hmm, are you deanosrs?

Really...the park would look good with different paths...just try it...please. The paths may not even look as bad if the rooves were black, or any other color. It's just too washed out as it is. And change the land color under the paths to something other than grass.

The people here may be critical, but it at least has been constructive criticism for you...which is more than many others have received.

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love the paths

Don't expect to get very much positive comments here... over looks nice, do what you want.

Oaky, I think it looks pretty good, but the paths do have that pattern to them that makes ehm al little dizzying. I love your crazy mouse. it's awesome. however, on the first screen on your latest post, there are a few too many vines. it looks too busy or patterned. as for the second, I liked the buildings in your first post better, but they're not bad. all said, your going to be a pretty good parkmaker some day. you just have to let yourself develop a style and ignore most of the people on here when they get rude (hey, I even fall into that catagory sometimes. ) So go on building and have fun.

Nice stuff so far, i hate the hotel though, that thing looks awful (to me personally), rest looks good.

Strangely enough, the mouse looks wonderfull, i don't know why exactly but i like it, the part on top of the building looks very nice.

about the paths, i quite like em to, they're used a lot here in holland for roads and so on so i'm used to it, the trick is however not to go over the top with em, use em in special area's, they might attract a lil to much attention when they're around every attraction.

nice stuff

yay!! new update!

some new things in the mainstreet! you'll find it by your self!

there they are!




and I think that one will be great for some people! because... I've changed the path! on that side off course (not everywhere )


hope you like it!

As I've said before, I like the rock work around your wild mouse building. I have to agree that you've received some good feedback in this thread!

Definately change pretty much all the path types in your park. Paths are so critical to a park, they're everywhere.... If the path type sucks, it'll drag your whole park down. It's like having a primer paint job on a '69 camaro!

Oh, it's nice to see that you took my advice in changing the color of your coaster!

for a first park its amazing. i like the style, very realistic

i actually like it

Not bad, not bad at all.

Kinda realistic, kinda paramounts/sf like (at least to me )

The paths still could use a lil fixin up here and there. change the land under the path to like dirt just to make it look better (for this situation)

My biggest concern with this park is the structural design. It is one thing you need to work on. Though you attempt to detail, the blockiness and such still show in many areas. Therefore change that up a bit but I can see your on the right path