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Here are the beginnings of my first LL-Park. Do't be too hard, it's my first time. It's not only thrown together, I thought a lot about it.

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Thx to Maggi who told me what's important for a good park.
Sorry for my bad english...

I actually like it a lot. I'm not sure why.
It just looks fun.

Do NOT apologize for your lack of fluency in another person's language, everything comes in time.

The screenshots look good, but it's rather basic because there are only two elements at work in them.

Looks good, but another wall texture wouldn't hurt. Lets see some brown (red-like) wood.

There's something about it that just works though.

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Hey Critic where've you been?

It looks funky - you seem to be missing a few fences here and there, though.

It reminds me of Canterbury Falls, a bit, not sure why. Not of the same league, obviously, but well on the way. As others have said, another texture may help, and maybe calm down on those ramparts walls.

It reminds me of one of the scenarios. Or something like that. Looks nice, but as others have said, it could use another texture.

hey, willkommen
deine höflichkeit ist sehr angenehm. ich hoffe wir können uns bald mal unterhalten.

die screens sind gar nicht so übel. sie machen auf mich einen sehr unsicheren und wackeligen eindruck, was ganz natürlich ist, weil wie du sagtest, es ist dein erster park. aber ich finde auch, dass man ein wenig potenzial sehen kann.
mein hauptproblem ist, dass es für mich nicht nach freizeitpark ausschaut. ich bin total into realism, musst du wissen.

It reminds me of Canterbury Falls, a bit, not sure why. Not of the same league, obviously, but well on the way.

I agree.

I would suggest using some more wall textures, and perhaps adding some brushes and small trees inside the 'castle', or whatever you want to call it. You can especially see this in the 2nd pic, on the right...where the coaster goes down, a different land texture and brushes and trees would help the atmosphere a lot.

Thank you for your help! I'm very happy about your reactions and I'll try to do what you told me. I went on with the park, but it's only a small update. I tried to use other wall and land textures, I added the fences where they were missing and I changed some of the castle-walls into wooden walls.

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I hope, you like it...

@posix: Danke für den freundlichen Kontakt! Du hast mir sehr geholfen.

Although theres not much to go on it looks like you have a really nice style
I like the way the park looks over all at the moment.
theres deffinetly alot of potential here especially for a first time LLer
the 2nd screens are an improvement too. the wood helps break up the stone walls.

The building-coaster interaction does look very impressive.

I went on with the new area. Some details are still missing and I don't really like the buildings but in my opinion it doesn't look too bad.

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Everything is still very cramped, but it looks wonderful nontheless.

New Update:

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Some details are still missing. I'm going to finish the park this week because I haven't got to go to school the next five days.

Put dirt under the path, and it's wonderful.

[font="Geneva"]You have a very interesting style and I like it. It would look better with dirt under the paths though as yyo said. Looks interesting and unique but a bit messy in places. Quite refreshing in a way.[/font]

Its not bad. It's just a bit bland and boring in some spots. Very unique style however.

the ships are a great idea. can't wait to see it finished.

Some more Screens:

http://mitglied.lyco...rcer/Bild12.jpg

http://mitglied.lyco...rcer/Bild13.jpg

http://mitglied.lyco...rcer/Bild14.jpg

There are some more details, rides and I added workers. There's some dirt under the paths, what really wasn't easy at some places. I hope you like it...

Now it's time to release the park. I think, I will call it "MiddleAges". Thank you Posix and Maggi who helped me a lot.