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I'm giving myself some practice for the olympics and I need some feedback. Started a 50x50 spooky themed park, only made this building so far. The ride you see is Dracul's Castle, the local woody







I think the castle turned out pretty well myself...

Looks good, and I think you've done pretty good with the terrain as well. The coaster looks alright, I'd have to see more of it... Definately needs some treeing, but I'm assuming that you've only just started.

Looks very nice. Although I dont like the right part of the castle on the first screen, its to flat and the flagtowers looks like they were put on to fill te place.

I dont know. It looks like you raised the land to meet the coaster instead of the coaster being built to fit the terrain. To me the goal for terrain building in this is game is to acheive the latter not the former. But that could be me

The Rick

Another park? well....
It looks pretty god, but normally in a forest there are trees...

Wick

I sortof finished the first area, I'll probably tune it a little more, but I like it this way...

Daxter: Thanks for pointing that area out... I rushed it a little but I've changed it now, I hope you like it better this way

Rick: You're half right, I made most of the land first, then did the coaster, then fixed the land around it some more... But most of the land was there already...

And for the treeing comments, I've fixed that now

Anyways, here are the pics:


The fixed castle


The lift hill of the coaster


And a random coaster pic

Hello.


The uphill cemetery idea is awesome.
You do need to fix the tombstones though because they float in mid-air...

The coaster is ok so far.
The stairs leading up to the entrance are missing something...
You should also put something over the first block of the castle where the entrant meets because you can see into the castle and it looks bad.

Other than that I say everything else looks ok.


Raven-SDI
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