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This is a duo with someone in my club, RCT:A. I have now sent this park to RCT Maniac and he will begin to build shortly.


That is all I've done so far. All comments welcome.

Cant see the screen.

Edit: i can see it now.

I think your buildings are very nice and this could actully be a pretty nice park but its your landscaping and folige. Atm they basicly suck, if i was you i would add a few more bushes around the edges of the path and that pond, also i would'nt just scatter them anywhere, try to think about where you are placing them and if they look decent and fit the theme.

Lastly as this is Egypt and supposed to be dry and have hardly any trees i would suggest adding a few more different types of palm trees, add them near where you have the bushes and hack bushed underneath some of the trees.

Ah yes also, i think you desperatly need some flowers in there, as you have hardly any colour incorporated in the buildings they would really give the screen what it needs.

Hope that helped, good luck on the park dude.

Link to screen.

EDIT*Thanks. I know I suck with foliage, and I am trying, but I do need a few flowers, what colour would you say?

I got the idea I'm missing 1 additional color in the screen, yellow I think... I think it's cause of the green supports for the coaster, there's basically 2 colors and the land... Brown, green, sand

since there is a lack of color it looks very plain. my suggestion is to play with the mountain tool, because flat is boring. thats my 2 cents

Needs:
- More colour
- Different land colours
- Less random foilage
- Some land elevation
- Make the pool a little less regular

Too many lanterns!

Other than that,
good start!

I would say either red flowers or blue.

I think the coaster crosses over the path too much. That's my only query...

It is supposed to go over the path, the coaster is called magic carpet, so you have to imagine your riding a magic carpet above everybody.

It isnt really egyptian, try using more egyptian scenery , change the monorail colour too.

It is supposed to go over the path, the coaster is called magic carpet, so you have to imagine your riding a magic carpet above everybody.

Just coz you're on a magic carpet don't mean it has to fly as much as possible over everyone.

^lol, ok. i'll try my best to improve that section, in the mean while I leave you with a new section of the park......no name yet, any suggestions?

Also, how do i change the name of the topic? The park name is now the forgotten continent.

You've gotten craploads better, but the coaster layout is messy and horrible. The theming looks pretty futuristic, until you get to the spanish rooves and castle-ish walls. Sort that, and you'll be alright.

There's a bunch more stuff, now that I look at it, like how you've overused the arch, the brown path, the 1-width path, the grass landtype, etc.

Edited by postit, 23 January 2005 - 11:20 AM.

that isnt a rip off of anything just recently released.....

It is good but take out the arches it looks too much like a H2H park.
Your architecture can still be improved. and dont make the path all the same length

^Shhh, no-one is supposed to notic that.


Postit, what rooves do you suggest i use?

Looks familiar...

As i told you over AIM, you are improving very fast. There is something not quite right about your buildings though, they don't seem to 'flow'. Probably didn't make sense...

-X-

dont see why they tihnk its bad i like it

There, I removed the arches. Also, thanks to whoever changed the name!

yea, youve definatly improved.
anyway, im also curious, how do you change the name of a topic?

Ok,here's some of my work..the name of the coaster is:Indiana Jones and the Cursed Treasure.Tell me what you think.









Teaser of the finished temple: