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The station looks way to small for the size of the coaster. Also, I don't like the layout for the coaster, Giant Panda looked much better. And why is there a waterfall coming from a path on land?!?!

update:

Here is Troll again:


The new resturaunt:


Tornado and an arcade:


Some theming:

I don't like either coaster. The wooden coaster is all turns, even Wildcat has hills (being that you were emulating that one.) And I've never seen a B&M with that many horizontal turns.

I'm not the person to ask about R-C'Tecture... I'm still getting the hang of it myself. (A 2-3 year vacation from RCT can do that to you)

Thats it! I give up, Im ditching this park for now, I want to practice a little more.


Someone close this.

Why can't this park be your "practice"? Hell isn't every park practice?

Thats it! I give up, Im ditching this park for now, I want to practice a little more.


Someone close this.

You're trying to do too much at once. The fact that the best parks take many months to complete can tell you a lot. If you're quitting at stuff this early, man, you're going nowhere...

Our criticism is meant to help you for the future. Read it, and try to improve. Don't expect that people will love your work if you post screens a day or two later. The best things take time, my friend...

okay, I'll continue, and I'll try to take my time. Sorry I wasnt trying flaming any of you in anyway, I just have too many opinions and Im so confused on what to do with this roller coaster. So can I please just have a few straight up answers as to what I should do. Should I keep Troll COMPLETELY redo it again?

Actually, I like Troll. Maybe smooth out the landscaping, and add a few shrubs and bushes. All that jagged land is a little over the top. Basically, it's not too bad, but your architecture needs more detail. Like windows and stuff. So, just keep working at it, and I am sure you will improve.

Just a little idea:



If you'd higher the land under this turn to make it look like the track lies on the landscape. I think it would look pretty nice, and your coaster interacts with the landscape some more then ..

I quite like the layout from what I can see, maybe a bit chaotic, but nice. I think if you theme / landscape it some more it will look great.

You know, when I first saw that, I thought it was a middle finger.

You know, when I first saw that, I thought it was a middle finger.

Yeah it's a pretty crappy arrow indeed >_>

You know, when I first saw that, I thought it was a middle finger.

Lmao! Me too!

-Ryan

You know, when I first saw that, I thought it was a middle finger.

I thought it was a dick.

i liked ur first idea for the coaster...the oriental one...it looked nice and had some good theming possibilities...troll looks like poo on a mountain...

I thought it was a blind canadian gerbil giving birth to a three-legged moose.

I like the park. You've got a unique architectural style. Nice use of colors and everything, and I love your landscaping. Keep up the great work!

I was playing around and happend to make something that is looking better than this so Im gonna drop this.

Here is a teaser of my new park.

it doesnt look half bad...i sorta like it...even tho the colors are a little bright...but then again...look at the laguna azul area in my park im working on.....its brite too...lol...but keep up the good work my friend...

I thought it was a dick. 

hahaha we are intitled to our opinions

Your latest screen shows promise and is shit loads better then the previous screens. Thats cool how the coaster goes through those towers. Buildings are a definite improvement as well. The colors... well I like them alot better then what you were using before in the old screens. This could actually be a decent park, so keep truck'n' with it.

I like the small towers, I don't really like the big tower... It's just to tall for a 1 squared building IMO...