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Hi!, I'll be releasing Davis Lake soon. But at the same time Im starting another park which is at the moment unnamed. There reallt is no specific theme just yet.

anyways here is the small entrance plaza.



I know the landscape is basically flat right now but Im gonna fix that...hopefully .


please comment.

Your architecture is improving alot, but you need to work on your color combinations. They're a bit too bright.

Also, try to plan in your head the layout and/or theme of the park, that way you have a goal and you know what you're doing doesn't fit or if it does.

Yea, Im gonna change the colors. keep em comin

I definetley think its gotten way better but i do not think that the flat roofs are working for you theirs to much room the only person ive really seen make really awsome flat roofs would be scareface. Anyway i love the chargers colors huge fan maybe this could be a tribute park?

Sparker

I did the colors over, I also started on my 1st coaster, Storm. A twisted(Wildcat-like) wooden coaster.






Sparker:I looked at some of Scarfaces rct2 parks to getan idea of how to build on flat rooves.

Here is still the unfinished Storm:


Here is a little archy:


please comment.

Fine! dont comment, its because Im black isnt it! JK

I have an update.
Here is my new coaster Giant Panda it will be located in the China area, Im not finished with the station or the landscape yet.



COMMENT NOW!!! :annoyed: jk

You need to make that coaster more interesting.

1. USE the landscape, don't have random hills just on the side.

2. Interactions with paths and architecture are essential...

If you don't use both of those in every coaster you make, you will never become a good parkmaker. In my mind, it's as simple as that. Spend time with interactions and try to make it innovative. Right now that coaster design is too clustered, and frankly, worthless.

Your greenery selection isn't good at all. Go for variety and use bushes, shrubs, etc. to your advantage.

I hate it when I have to repeat myself to everyone, but if you want to improve, you should take that into consideration...

Fine! dont comment, its because Im black isnt it! JK

Whoa, your're BLACK? Looking at your picture, I thought you just had black spots.

It looks pretty good, I like the colors...they're calm and settling. The architecture looks a bit blocky, I'd try making smaller buildings but that's just me. Otherwise, you have a beautiful realistic park.

Whoa, your're BLACK?  Looking at your picture, I thought you just had black spots.

LOL!

Sorry, I think it's ugly. That layout of the wooden coaster is simply dreadful.. you should fix it I guess.

i like the wooden coaster a lot, actually.

Im ditching the China idea Ive redone the landscape. I'll have screens soon.

and here are some older screens I forgot to post.





older than obove screen.

Why ditch the oriental theme? with some different terrain and landscaping, it could of come out to be a really neat area. Oh and could I suggest some water around Storm? Maybe some 2 x 3 small lakes that could be puddles after the storm in a way...

I see alot of improvement, the coaster layout looks pretty bad and is the worse thing I see right now it just is to compact and should be a bit more spread out. The archy in some areas also looks kinda shot and could use some work.

I have TOTALLY reshaped Giant Panda and transformed it into a whole new monster named, Troll. Here are some screens.





and 1 more...


I still am not done with the shrubery.

please comment.

hahahahaha

man... that twister brings back memories...

^Are you saying its bad?

I like the layout, but the colors on the coaster look like well..... poo....

^Are you saying its bad?

I think he's referring to the old days of RCT when coaster layouts were crazy looking (in a good way) and wild and had a lot of turn as well as inversions.

I'm not a big fan of the screens. They look like a coaster that has just finished being connstructed (really unfinished). The archy is pretty bad (aka blocky)and the 1x1 paths make me go: . The terrain itself if very boring and could use some sprucin' up. I'm not a big fan of the coaster layout, it looks overly congested and it looks rushed and just could use some work. Maybe view some of the Spotlights and Runner-Ups for ideas on a good coaster layout. The water looks un-neat and has edges exposed. You have small areas of water coming out of no where and waterfalls coming nothing. I'm not trying to flame your park in anyway, just giving some constructive criticism.

I dont know what demon is talking about concerning the colors, they look fine to me, just make the supports silver or something

You have a good idea and a pretty good start. Just keep building and fix a few things i mentioned.

R.A.S.
NOTE: all the comments i made about the previous 3 screens only

I dont know what demon is talking about the colors, the look fine to me, just make the supports silver or something

It's more that I have always hated that color in the game more than anything. If it was landscaped right then it'd work fine.