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  • Evil WME%s's Photo
    mmm... i'm particularly fond of those green lines along side of those paths. They made my day.
  • artist%s's Photo
    Im not adding alot of unnessacary fences in this area, i want it to be alot more natural.
  • Richie%s's Photo
    Dont change a thing, i love it.
  • rK_%s's Photo
    why do you people find it necessery to change your name every month.

    it looks like everyone of you parks so far, you keep building the same idea to a different color.

    i want somthing new.
  • Tech Artist%s's Photo
    Here is the last topic for this park with screens. Just incase any of you want to see it.

    The only thing I don't like about this new screen is the yellow poles. The poles themselves are fine but they need a color change. Try that dull brown.
    1 other thing, try redoing the building on the bottom right there. It looks cluttered and a little blocky.

    I think the main thing this park needs is foliage and landscaping work. If your having problems with it, look at this small tutorial or ask some one to help you with it.
    Imo, doing that will greatly increase your chances of getting a runner up and would make this park look a whole lot better.

    Overall, nice work on this park. I think with some changes here and there, this could have a chance at getting runner up and will turn out a lot better than it is now.
  • Geoff%s's Photo
    I quite like it chris.

    Very clean, and neat. It's just nothing to get too excited about.

    I think you need some bigger trees. Everything is mostly a shrub... and that hardly competes with the architecture you have, (as in height, and balance). Just my opinion. Good job overall.
  • Scarface%s's Photo
    Only thing i can say is to ignore machunks comments and leave it.

    Looks very good.
  • Evil WME%s's Photo
    i especially like the landscaping. unique and fresh. you don't have to jag rocks and this right here is proof of it.

    i can't believe how people are reacting to this anyhow. The yellow poles are FINE. they look better yellow, than in another color. trust me.

    as i told Artist on aim, the only problem i forsee is the two buildings being very different and next to each other. I love that right one :p. I don't know about the red color in that left building, but i'm sure you got the colors figured out. In game these things tend to somewhat work out indeed.

    Now leave me be, as i think of rctfan telling you to work on this to make runner-up. The way I see it, runner-up's in the bag and the only doubtful thing there is, is whether this'll win spotlight or not.
  • Madhollander%s's Photo
    Think it looks good the way it is, the only thing i don't really like is the entrance, trow in some more colours.

    looks good
  • X250%s's Photo
    Fantastic work, i love the lime green building in the centre. The dark red works perfectly with it. The rest of the screen is fabulous, the pink flowers bring it to life. Me likey. :)

    -X-
  • Infernoman%s's Photo
    Hmmm yea i guess it looks okay
  • Turtle%s's Photo

    Now leave me be, as i think of rctfan telling you to work on this to make runner-up. The way I see it, runner-up's in the bag and the only doubtful thing there is, is whether this'll win spotlight or not.


    In person this park is even more impressive. I think you could be right.

    I love the screen, and this area is my favorite so far. It does look better now than on AIM, and the yellow poles are fine.
  • Tech Artist%s's Photo

    Now leave me be, as i think of rctfan telling you to work on this to make runner-up. The way I see it, runner-up's in the bag and the only doubtful thing there is, is whether this'll win spotlight or not.

    Change of opinion:

    The screens look like runner up quality but in game, it definetly looks like it has a chance for spotlight.
  • rK_%s's Photo
    unique and fresh?, nc has got skill, no doubt, but your just building the same thing over. this park can go places fast but im seeing the same thing again, and again. put somthing new in, get some new themes in there and your color scheme has changed and im liking it, im just seeing the use for the same objects in the same places time and time again =/.
  • Richie%s's Photo
    He HAS got new themes, he has done different things.

    It definately has got a chance at spotlight, just depends if he can finish it off to the high standard he started it with. Dont get bored and rush it to finish.
  • artist%s's Photo
    Well i know i said the last updated was going to be the final one but the park will still be a couple more weeks mainly due to the collabo, inter site competition and some other stuff i have going on.

    Anyways on to the screen, this area is the last area left in the park, Port Nazca it is themed to a small village at the bottem of a huge beautiful mountain where a mysterious beast lies.

    This is mainly a "get the feel of the area screen" as i do not want to give alot away about this area.

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    Sorry the screen is a little incomplete.

    And here is a screen of the map of BGE, as you can see it is about 85% complete, not long now. :D

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    Anyways, enjoy.

    Thanks.
  • Steve%s's Photo
    thats really classy, Chris.

    can't wait to see that woodie themed! :D
  • X250%s's Photo
    This should get spotlight no problem. The last screen is wonderful, everything looks perfect and i can't wait for the release!

    -X-
  • laz0rz%s's Photo
    It's okay, not great, not bad.

    I just feel you're using too many textures in this screen. If you can find a way to make the textures less clashy, that would look better.

    That building at the bottom is the best one in the screen. The only flaw is the dark color. Maybe put on a lighter brown.

    As I said, not great, not bad.
  • Leighx%s's Photo
    Didnt expect another update...

    Anyway i like it. Cant see anything wrong with the screen, still cant wait to the relase.
    :)

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