Screenshot / Wervelwind

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  posted 11 years ago

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  Ling Offline

  You need some different colors in the foliage. Everything is white or nearly the same shade of green. Coloring the bullrushes and adding some flowers with a stark color like red or light blue could do wonders. I like the layout, even if it is quite unconventional. I also like the queue, though there should be more of that structure/cover on the right, because it's very well-done.

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  ][ntamin22 Offline

  Neat layout.  Ling is absolutely right; you need to play with some additional color.  The architecture is very nice, colors aside.

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  navalin Offline

  I actually really like the colors, feels very Heidi Park-esque. I agree that some additional flowerbeds and stands of different texture and color would help, but it's a really great start. 

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  Nitrous Oxide Offline

  Looking good. Maybe a different path to the queue up from the midway. Not a big deal though.

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  Liampie Online

  Green-white for the station and all decorations is too much in my opinion... The rest is likable.

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  Kevarchitect Offline

  I enjoy this a lot. Just a bit of variety in the colors would be nice, but I love everything else. The layout is a very welcoming change to the "beloved" (personally I find them incredibly boring) Vekoma corckscrew! Good Job!

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  posix Offline

  Nice, but sterile. Add little shops and other small things for people to do. Also use the land tool a bit more to vitalise the landscaping and make it look for organic. Needs more dirt texture and jagged rocks here and there. Also could use some shrubs.

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