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10-June 14
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Seaside
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looks pretty nice
The coaster looks a little chaotic, but not terrible. Everything else is not very special, but it works. There's one thing that sticks out positively: the colours. Salmon is a great choice and it works really well with the blues and tans. The plural of photo is photos, not photo's.
Keep up the good work!
Oi. Finally some work of yours I can get into!
edit: except for the supports on the chain lift. Why are they higher than the track?
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Sensing some clogged peepflow in that area...
Good work!
i like the white building
I really like this, not sure about the station though. It's a bit too roundy and that doesn't really fit with the coaster. Maybe replace those curved track pieces for straight-down/up track pieces, it could look a lot better.
It's nice but I feel you need to spice up the station a bit more.
so i made a lighthouse on the map, but i don't like it that much, however i would really like to still have a lighthouse
what would you guys suggest? anything i can do better? because i feel like i could improve it
I like it, but it should probably be bigger (footprint) and taller. The bottom doesn't look right, there should probably be an actual roof. You know my thoughts on the first screen.
The top section could do with being a bit taller.
Make it look like a lighthouse
No really, just add white-red round blocks to it, it will surely look more like a lighthouse. I like the building underneath it and the supports on it but it would more it as some sort of urban building or a castle.
not every lighthouse is cliché red and white, i always try to avoid cliché's like that in order to stay original, besides there's a ton of lighthouses like this who are made out of brick, or are just white.
when i finally have the time to build on this again in maybe 5 days i'll make the top out of glass and put some of those quarter tile martian lamp objects in.
I don't think it needs the red-and-white. Most are just white, actually. Just needs to be taller so it stands out as more than just a tall building.
Maybe the structure is a bit too simple and doesn't look like a lighthouse that much? You should add light and glass or bigger openings on top so the light of the tower can illuminate the sea.
Even ancient roman lighthouses have bigger openings (link)
"MFG"
like i said, when i have the time to do it i will make it taller and replace the top with glass. i could use the circular NCSO objects, but i never really liked those that much, and i want to keep this a brick structure.
Don't do it with walls. Place egyptian colums or needles at the corners for an open structure.