Screenshot / A woodie
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09-May 14
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The steel lattice wall supporting the NCSO wooden supports doesn't look right.. everything else looks pretty decent. I would recommend using more colors than just brown, green, and yellow exclusively.
I have to agree about the lattice wall, but in my opinion the supports aren't needed anyway. I'm not sure if I like the yellow motive in this screen. It might be too simplistic for me in the end. Could be wrong though... Prove me wrong?
edit: Forgot to say that I otherwise like the screen. Very tranquil. Good layout too, as far as I can see.
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As a realism-Nazi, I'd reccommend throwing the 6-seater trains on there since, from what I can tell, you're going for a classic PTC coaster. But, if realism doesn't matter to you, than disregard this statement.
I'm with the posters above as far as the latticework goes. In fact, if you want those supports there, I'd say perhaps move the pathway back from the coaster a tile or two to add another row of the NCSO wooden support for a more realistic feel to the supports.
Overall though, its a cute screen. Your simplistic style is really fun to look at.
Is the brake run going through the station? At first I thought it was a transfer track but the more I look at it the more I feel like it's the brake run. If so I might re-work that as it doesn't really make sense but overall this is very nice.
Pleasant stuff. But I agree with the suggestion of taking back the path one tile, and using more triangular wooden supports to the floor.
lovely work. Good composition and use of color.