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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • Mr.Brightside711%s's Photo

    This is really nice! 

  • deanosrs%s's Photo

    Yeah this is wonderful, I really like the church, detail level of feel of the graveyard. Very nice. The only thing I see to maybe tweak is the pink trees. They don't feel to the same scale as the rest of the foliage.

  • Turtle%s's Photo

    very nice this, quite poignant actually. classy. i really like the church building, and the foliage and leaves under the trees are great!

  • TimmyTuner%s's Photo

    Looks great, i really like the big trees and the smaller foliage!

  • posix%s's Photo

    Strong vibe. Keen to see your progress as a player.

  • Liampie%s's Photo

    The graves are larger than the car parking spaces. 20%

     

    Nice work regardless, good eye for detail. The fallen leaves like Turtle said, but also the garbage dump in the bottom right corner, and the lovely seating area in the middle.

     

    Maybe put one car in the parking lot for the grieving peeps.

  • barnNID%s's Photo

    Foliage is high quality. Like actually unreal landscaping work. I agree that the park spots should be bigger. I'd also make those grass trim objects lining the sidewalk/road a shade darker so they are the same shade as the grass. 

  • slimcrusty%s's Photo

    Thanks guys, yeah the car park was a after thought. I did try to jam a car in there but it looked off, because it was so tight. the plan was to throw a bike up against the fence. As if mother walked and the child rode. Realised I forgot it after I had posted it unfortunately.

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